While I don't usually read general fiction that was enjoyable and a lovely read. I love your description of Harry; a very nice flow. A little more information would have been nice. In my opinion, the story was a much too thin.

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Well, I think it has excellent makings of a multi-chaptered story. You'd just have to really think of when you'd set in in the Buffyverse and how it would affect everything. I'd read it, even though I usually don't read general fiction. Also, it's fresh. HP characters coming into their world, instead of Buffyverse characters going to them. Give it a try and if doesn't work, it doesn't work. Good luck!

Well, as I said in the author's note, this was just a one-shot to get the plot bunny into words. I'm not sure if I want to flesh the story out and add more chapters to it. What do you think?

Sweet. I like it.

Cute kids. One way to ditch a prophecy ;)

This is an excellent started to an interesting story. I do hope you continue.

That was a really good beggining hope you do a sequel soon

That's an interesting beginning! I would love to see Harry, Remus and Sirius interacting with the Scoobies.

cool

Cute.

And I thought my Mom was the only one crazy enough to take kids to a war zone. ; ]

Nice story, will you write a sequel?
It would be fun to see how the gang would react to the magical children.