Wow! From apple pie to rancid maggot stew. Quiet a nasty change in the feel of your story. I just hope everything ends well.

The Apple-Pie life....or something like it.
it's not always light and fluffy ;)
thanks for the review!

Very nasty chapter! Good but nasty.

Wispr

i know O.o
thanks for the review!

Yelp... trouble. Creepy chapter, very well done.


Wispr

thanks!
glad you like it

Oh! I smell trouble ahead! Wish I had a cousin like that!

Wispr

heh heh, the coolest people are often fictional; sucky huh?

Okay, so the apple pie life has a few worms in it, eh? Poor little Matt.

yup, big fat icky worms

thanks for the review

Lol! Sometimes the Dark Side is just so darn seductive, isn't it? I continue to enjoy the heck out of your story. Thanks again.

To William it is, well he IS the son of Spike (:
glad you like the story
thanks for the review!

Very cute, doing a great job writing the children, their cute without being sickly sweet. Can't wait for more!

Wispr

thanks,

Your story is just so cute. I look forward to more.

thanks

I'm sorry to hear that Spike and Buffy are 'just friends' now, but I love it that they managed to create little William, and that he's looking out for the other children when some bullies need a butt-kicking (wearing the leather duster his dad gave him for his birthday, no less)!

i never really like the Buffy/Spike pairing, it just grossed me out; still William's inherited Buffy's biting humor and Spike's sarcasm and ruthlessness. those bullies will difinately regret going after Matt.

Yay! Jonathan still lives! You know, Jon and a deratted Amy would make a cute couple. Just saying. Wow! I am impressed with the quickly organized sleeping arrangements. It sounds like back when me and my siblings were all young and all our cousins came over for a sleep-in. Lots of chaos, but lots of fun, too with 13 or more kids. But you did hurt my feelings with: William now wondered whether or not uncle Andrew’s second child would be a geek, he hoped not. It must be odd for the man’s wife to be, currently, the only sane person in the family. Hey! We geeks are sane. We are just more enthusiastic about some odd things than most. Lol! Great story and I look forward to more.

lol, i'm a geek too; William was just saying what HE thought; he's the kid of Spike and Buffy so it's kinda inevitable that he'd think like that.
i suppose it would've take longer with the sleeping arrangements, but you know Willow; she's pretty organised and usually thinks ahead
Yep, the only one of the 'Trio' to die was Warren, thank god; i hate that misogynous, perverted, psychopathic killer.

He now burns in Hellfire (:

Thanks for the review!

You are so fast, you almost slipped this update by me. Lol! I can't wait to see a few bullies turned into rats. Ugly ones with feas. Just saying... Your story still just make me smile as I read it.

the next one's about to be put up
yep, i always hated bullies; they'll definitely suffer (:
thanks for the review!

Oh very nice and very interested in whats going on with the quiet one.

Good work.

Wispr

thanks, Matt's my favourite (:

Really enjoying this story, keep up the good work!

Wispr

Thank you! i've just finished the fifth chapter so that'll be sent sometime today :)

Cute kid... just love the "N-no." Very nice chapter.

Wispr

yup, Sammie's pretty cute, huh.

Glad to see a mini Spike/Buffy combo. Really doing well with the kids personalities.

Wispr

thanks!