Wow. I think you should turn this into a full story, at least 100,000 words. It is one of the best premises for a Buffy/Alien/Predator crossover I've ever read... 8)

This deserves a full story, great idea. This makes three stories in recent days I have read with good premise. I hope for more of all of them.

Credible translocation and good characterization, as usual. I admire the way you're able to drop your protagonists (Buffy) into the middle of a plot so seamlessly in all your short stories. We all know what comes next, so it doesn't have to be said.

I haven't seen AVP but this sounds like it might be interesting.

"“Tomorrow,” he said softly. “Tomorrow.”

Buffy stilled. Tried to breathe. Tried to clench her teeth against a gasp.

Tried to understand the sudden, unexpected terror that stabbed through her brain.

And for the first time in nearly three years, the Slayer moved beneath her skin."


---Oh! Oh oh oh! You have to write more of this story! *begs and pleads on knees* Please! So good; I love most of your stories but this one seems a little different than your others. The fact that Buffy remembers her life in Sunnydale before she was sucked into the AVP world is a detail I enjoy. (but her amnesia in your other stories is just as appealing when I read those)

I'm excited to read more of this story line. Please continue it!

Silly Buffy. Take the money, go to the meeting and then run. Run for your life! *grin*

WOOT! this looks really really REALLY amazing~! I hope you keep on posting!

I'm intrigued.

"And for the first time in nearly three years, the Slayer moved beneath her skin."

Very cool. Look forward to reading more hopefully soon

YES! Great update with some nice back-story and some very nice evil premonitions. So Buffy skipped universes? Bummer for her, great for us. And now she gets to fight both Aliens and Predators. The poor girl just can't get a break, can she. You write a great story and your setup is terrific. I so look forward to more of your story. I wonder if Buffy will eventually get adopted into the Predator clans? Lol!

..T_T I didn't really understand this fic a whole lot, but it really did pique my interest. I want to know more about this little..world you've createddd.

I'm guessing tomorrow she'd be facing teh alienzzzz? >.>''

How did they know to hire her?!

Thanks for sharing, eitherway.

I hope the Predators give her a place of honor!

Oh, Buffy in AVP-verse. Yummmm. Dark and creepy and sad with a touch of humor (And last time I checked, the British Museum doesn't put hits out on the competition.” I think.). Niiiiice. I love how you just give us the set up for it, not the whole thing. Makes me wonder, though, what she did in that year in between to get all that money to fund Yutani. And, you know, what would happen in Slayer vs. Alien vs. Predator. Other than lots of violence.

Ah, well, updates shall be lauded and praised, new or old. Though, after three new fics (dark and pretty and shiny though they may be), I would totally *love* to see something older updated (hinthinthinthinthint).

You can't leave it there! More please!

Frakking cool to the nth power! Will there be more to this?