Review of chapter "5" from
LFWReview:
An amazing thought not something I would try with out lots of alcohol though
Looking forward to more
Review By [
LFW] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from
twoeightysixReview:
Excellent story.
Review By [
twoeightysix] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "5" from
RabidRejectReview:
Awesome. More please!
Review By [
RabidReject] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from
DragonelfReview:
Yay, new chapter.
I just hope that Xander's new clothes will resize themselves
when Xander returns to normal size and shape.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot pecan pie::
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Life... is like a grapefruit. It's orange and
squishy, and has a few pips in it, and some
folks have half a one for breakfast.
- Douglas Adams
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "5" from
misterqReview:
Heh, nice! Actually there's an idea - If they manage to capture the puppets and their egg, they could fix almost any wound. A slayer lost an arm? Just turn her into a puppet and sew another one on, then turn her back. And so on... Can't wait until the next installment.
Review By [
misterq] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from
KeldinReview:
Oh gods. With the exception of that last part there, there were so many times I started laughing during this that I think I might have hurt myself!
Comments from author:
I had to throw in a twist... and what better than having Xander sew himself an eye... pain and all.
Review By [
Keldin] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from
ElleriaReview:
Oooh....Update soon please!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from
erikthevikingReview:
A nice chapter until the end and then some very good characterization.
Well done.
Thanks
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from
DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
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Tattoo: Da plane. Da plane.
- Fantasy Island
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from
RabidRejectReview:
Awesome. More soon.
Review By [
RabidReject] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from
ShieldageReview:
I love this story. It's very cute. Nice idea having W&H equip Angel with increased sun resistance.
Good take on the emotional highs. Nice reaction to the clown fear.
Good to see Stephanie's connecting and that she's using his given name when he's in the room.
Comments from author:
thanks
I needed a way to get Angel into the story without having every scene be nighttime.
yeah, I adore steph... she'd be my perfect woman if she were real.
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from
CPTSkipReview:
This has to be one of the most ... unique ... stories I've ever read. Nice job with everyone's characters and with the large helpings of humor. I look forward to reading more of your crazy story.
Comments from author:
thanks
I knew that this would be fun, because its like a hyper xander with no mental filter
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3" from
ElleriaReview:
Poor Xander, what hell will those girls put him through now? Love this.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from
DragonelfReview:
Yay, a new puppet!Xander chapter.
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
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MacGyver: The great thing about a map:
it gets you in and out of places in a lot
of different ways.
- MacGyver (Episode: The Gauntlet)
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2" from
ElleriaReview:
Love this.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
