Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
manicReview:
I hope real life and your muse allow you to continue with this fic. Thanks again for sharing with us.
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manic] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Go West young man" from
manicReview:
"Nathan Fillion and Alan Tudyk perform at the Edmonton Fringe festival last night." Is there video of this somewhere! Alan is freaking hilrious, and Nathan can be creepy, scary or funny, depending on the situation.
I loved Giles' and Xanders interactions in the hospital. Can't wait to find out if Xander is implicated in the theft of the rocket launcher! :)
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manic] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Morning in the land of Gibbs" from
manicReview:
"Apparently I should label my Gibbs as OOC."
LOL! I wasn't sure if I was going to leave a review for this chapter until I went to chapter 5 and saw this note. I was just thinking that I have a hard time seeing Gibbs involved with co-workers. He seems to be quite the hardass, especially about his rules. I only know the show through cross-over fics, though. For some reason, I have no problems seeing Jack O'Neill from Stargate in a possible slash relationship and/or involved with one of *his* teammates.
These were the thought that were going around in my head while I was contemplating whether or not to review. It sounds like you got your head bitten off :) I'm sad that there are only 2 more chapters to go.
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manic] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Home sweet Hellmouth." from
manicReview:
I was a little worried when your notes mentioned that there might be some Scooby bashing in the fic. That is a huge pet peeve of mine. But I thought you kept it all reasonable for the most part. I think Giles might have spoken up against the girls in the library, but at least you didn't have him joining in, and he realized his "mistake" later on and tried to rectify it.
As for the girls, considering the situation they are currently in, I don't think their reactions were too horribly out of wack. Certainly not worse than how everyone treated Buffy when she returned after running away. Things were said in the heat of the moment, and again, not too far off of series canon. I believe the situation with the Scoobies to still be salvageable, though perhaps painful.
I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Thank you for sharing. And thank you for the possible bashing warning.
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manic] • Date [2 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
LadeiaReview:
I really hope this hasn't been abandoned and that you'll have more for us soonish?? *pouts* pretty please????
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Ladeia] • Date [26 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
winnieReview:
hope this is inline for more story.
good story so far.
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winnie] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
springReview:
I love this fic so far and am extremely eager to see Gibbs reaction to learning who did the damage to Xander. More soon of this wonderful fic please.
Review By [
spring] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
ElleriaReview:
Please update soon!
Comments from author:
I'm working on it . . . the ideas are in my head but they don't seem to want to get onto the page!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
TouchoftheWindReview:
Hey, excellent last few chapters, i really cannot wait until they meet Xander, will this be Xanderslash too, maybe SpikeXander, wonder how Gibbs would react to Spike dating Xander....Hehe
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TouchoftheWind] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
MinkeReview:
Yeay! I'm enjoying this story. I think Gibbs could be very good for a young and 'not very confident' Xander. I can see them having trouble getting along in the future though since Gibb will want to be involved and Xander is used to doing whatever he wants. Please continue!
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Minke] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
SusanAnthonyReview:
I like the way you have Giles realizing that Xander was not jealous of Angel and did what he thought was right to make sure Buffy did what she needed to do to save the world. I look forward to reading more of your story.
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SusanAnthony] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
mithrilandtjReview:
Can't wait till Gibbs gets his hands on Xan's dad.
Or maybe the man just disappears. Gibbs was a marine sniper.
PS. I don't know what Tony's car is either. some kind of covertible sport classic something that got blown up this past season.
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mithrilandtj] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
CaliadragonReview:
I'm really enjoying this fic and I agree that that was a great spot to seperate the chapters. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next and I can see the mockage from both Tony and Xander about Hocus Pocus.
Thanks
Calia
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Caliadragon] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
silvergaurdReview:
Great new chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Review By [
silvergaurd] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Into the breach" from
slightlyeccentricReview:
This was great, I can't wait to see the 'Wrath of Gibbs'.
Review By [
slightlyeccentric] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated