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allisonreeveReview:
yes.
it would surely spice things up.
Comments from author:
mm, true. The I think would have the most truoble would be Xander.
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allisonreeve] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters 1 & 2" from
allisonreeveReview:
oh my god,
i love this story, it's so cool and the whole dawn being Jean-Claude's daughter thing is just bloody fantastic.
please update soon.
Comments from author:
will be working on that soon.
do you think anyone should show up from Sunnyhell?
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allisonreeve] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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XeeliaReview:
Wonderful story, do you plan to add more to it?
Comments from author:
eventually
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Xeelia] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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londeauxReview:
Should be an interesting story line. Curious how Dawn reacts to Anita and Richard. Be interesting if Dawn develops a schoolgirl crush on Richard. Also curious if Anita and Dawn square off concerning Jean-Claude, Asher, and possibly Richard.
Comments from author:
Richard is not my favorite character, his behavior in harlequinn pissed alot of people off with him. She ahd acrush on ASher and Damian at one point.
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londeaux] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KirallieReview:
How is Dawn his daughter? Why the sequal when Letters to a Friend says it is incomplete? Good start!
Comments from author:
Becuase i started this one before Letters but Letters leads in to it the way I wrote that one.
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Kirallie] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AliannaReview:
That was cool, more pls! ;)
wonder what would happen if Xander popped up or Spike, hehe.
Comments from author:
they'd get thier balls busted. Xander would not be allowed because he thinks he knows best for dawn and to find out her father is a vampire? big problem. Friends are one thing but a parent who has custody? So not the same thing in his eyes
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Alianna] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
