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ElleriaReview:
Please more?
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Elleria] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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springReview:
Okay these two chapters are good so far however the second is a bit confusing. Please update again soon.
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spring] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BluejelloReview:
Jacob in Sunnyhell? This could be interesting...
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Bluejello] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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mayoiReview:
hm... more?
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mayoi] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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JediKnightReview:
nice start, please add more.
Review By [
JediKnight] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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dugleikooReview:
I like it.
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dugleikoo] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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CaliadragonReview:
This was a great chapter. I loved the characterization of Jacob and I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
Thanks
Calia
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Caliadragon] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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samarakerinaReview:
Another great chapter. I could see Jacob really hating commercial flights. :)
Is he looking for Xander because o his cancer? I'm guessing Xander is one of Sam's mistakes before joining the USAF....
Looking forward for more! :D
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samarakerina] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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oneeyedwitchReview:
It sounds interesting, and I hope you post more soon. I really want to know how he is related to Jacob Carter.
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oneeyedwitch] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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limejuizeReview:
Like it so far. Can't wait for more!!
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limejuize] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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JasonBarnettReview:
considering the dream Xander had in Nightmares where he seemed to consider his father the real threat I think this is pretty different.
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JasonBarnett] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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GothicBiancaReview:
hmmm, this sounds interesting. You've caught my attention. Please continue, I'll be checking back for an update soon.
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GothicBianca] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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kyzhartReview:
Interesting start. It will be interesting to see where you go from here.
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kyzhart] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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LordCorwinReview:
Weird........
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LordCorwin] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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TempeReview:
Interesting. That's definitely a different view on Tony Harris then most have. He seems to always come out as the drunk and the abuser. It's nice to see a change of pace although I know it's to early realistically to know what his character is really like. So you said that Jacob's going to be the grandfather so that means either Sam and Mark(?) have another sibling, Tony is really Mark Carter who is Xander's father, or one of them gave up their child for adoption. I think I covered all the possibilities there. Who knows though? Anyway I'm really interested in seeing where you decide to go with this though. How old is Xander in this? Or what season of Buffy? Well, write more soon please.
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Tempe] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
