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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (2007%20Donor)

athenewolfe

Review:

Cute drabble!

Review By [ (2007%20Donor)

athenewolfe] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jess

Review:

Cute. I wonder how Anita would be at fps?

Review By [Jess] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart

Review:

I like it but I think I'd like it better if you just left it when JC asks her if he should get her one. It makes it more playfull and lighthearted. I don't feel the last sentences seems to add much at that point. You might try putting it in earlier in the fic when she first sees them playing that it seems out of place to her.

Review By [kyzhart] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]

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