the carpenter said something about training.maybe the centurion has studied allot of the different sword styles and knows some modern soldiers who can impart magically there skills and knowledge to Xander.

Love this. Looking forward to the next bit.

Solid story, if a bit confusing in places - but I quite like it. I hope to see more of it soon, its going to be interesting to see how the Scoobs react to this one :P

::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Jack Napier: Have you ever danced with
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Nice new chapter. I am looking forward to what else comes out of your brain for this story. *HUGS*

interesting

Needs... more chapters.

Nice work.

lol ... "partnering with her requires you to satisfy them, particularly her sexual needs" ... lol. A dream come true or be careful what you wish (Teen-level). I hope You write more soon.

Awesome. More soon!

Poor Xander. One situation after another. Tee hee. I like it.

Hmm.......You should now cover, about HOW, the Demons on the Earth Plane, Sunnyhell, and the soldiers/servants/champions of the PTB are running like headless Chickens, as the PTB have dissapeared, and for some reason, Wolfram&Hart has stopped all operations on current process....meanwhile the Seers on both sides are Having visions about "The Coming of the Balancer, the one wreathed on the powers of Heaven and Hell, who shall return the Balance to the Struggle" or some mystic BS like that...

Poor xander! having to...do the naughty, with an evil vile horrible demon...well the demon part is right! :)

Looking forward to more...of the story not just hot demony goodness

(and yes I'm male)

great job.

Interesting start. Feels a little rushed in places but your direction seems clear.

But, I'm wondering how Xander closed the portal since, if I recall correctly, it was supposed to require the blood of the person/creature who summoned Acathla to close the portal. Not just any old random Scooby blood.

Hmm...

From "Becoming, Part 2" : Drusilla tricks Giles into revealing the secret to Acathla:


Angelus "Blood. Of course. The blood on my hands
must be my own. I am the key that will open up the
door. My blood. My life."

And later - Whistler talking to Buffy:


Whistler "Angel’s the key. His blood will open the door to Hell. Acathla opens his big mouth, creates a vortex. Then only Angel’s blood will close it."


(Odd -- so Angel was the Key before Dawn :-))

So you might want to explain how Xander's blood is a substitute for Angel's. Distant ancestor? Magical clone? They both have sex with a slayer (though we haven't met Faith yet so that idea might not work at this point.)?

SWEET. I can just see Xander's new PA dressed in 1940's clothes.