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disamaReview:
aww... poor faith!
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disama] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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SkyefatherReview:
very nice still here and ready for more
*hugs&Kisses*
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Skyefather] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot cake::
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Brain: Are you pondering what I'm pondering?
Pinky: Whoof, oh, I'd have to say the odds of that are terribly slim, Brain.
Brain: True.
Pinky: I mean, really, when have I ever been pondering what you've been pondering?
Brain: To my knowledge, never.
Pinky: Exactly. So, what are the chances that this time, I'm pondering what you're pondering?
Brain: Next to nil.
Pinky: Well, that's exactly what I'm thinking, too.
Brain: Therefore, you are pondering what I'm pondering.
Pinky: Poit, I guess I am!
- Pinky and the Brain
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Comments from author:
Pinky and the Brain?!
OMG, I think I love you!
^_^
Or at least your review...
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Dragonelf] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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alphaursaReview:
I am seriously tearing up! Faith has to be so stressed at this point. I hope this good cry will release some of her built up emotions.
I love your plot! Its well thought out and it flows-it is not a bunch of facts thrown at you.
Review By [
alphaursa] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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PoliphiaReview:
You nailed Faith's voice. The pacing is excellent. I love the language lessons. What more can I say? This fic is just incredible and I can't wait for the next update!
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Poliphia] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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romeroReview:
Very nice update.
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romero] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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shelimarIIReview:
is there going to be a pairing in this fic? i hope so. I would really like to know so if you don't mind how about letting me know yea?
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shelimarII] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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DinaReview:
I'm almost surprised that it took this long for Faith to crack, but then again, she really is tough. She's the kind of girl who likes breakdowns to be quiet, personal, and away from watchful eyes. So good job! ^_^ Your rendition of Faith is very good. I love this chapter and I like that Faith is...for lack of better words, intrigued/attracted to Thranduil. And I fully understand that it is in a very platonic sense. I aboslutely can't wait for the next chapter and I'll be watching avidly for the next update. Please don't keep us waiting too long! Ta!
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Dina] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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jupitarsdaughterReview:
'love with the fiery intensity of a thousand hot suns'
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jupitarsdaughter] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AllenPittReview:
Like! Since there are no elf-kids anymore, I expect a vast throng of elleths to descend upon the Poor Abandoned Waif, much to her annoyance ... all determined to take care of her. She'll be lucky to escape their clutches when Gandalf leaves...
Later on (by the way) he should be very interested in English, especially when he finds out there's a written form, and she' literate in it. He can keep notes that nobody else can read or send her messages etc...
Huh. I wonder if there are any root words he'd recognize...have to think about that. Probably not....elvish is kinda/sorta based on Finnish not English....
Hm, he has a great memory so when he does learn English he's going to realize what she was saying those first days. heh heh (ie cursing etc)
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AllenPitt] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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NightscreamReview:
Oh please update again soon, this fic is really good, but the chapters are just to short! lol!
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Nightscream] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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kiyoReview:
at last, we've reached civilization! it'll be great to see how you play this out.
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kiyo] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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OrangesRcoolReview:
I absolutely loved this chapter! I don't think I could ever loathe this with the fiery intensity of a thousand burning suns.
Review By [
OrangesRcool] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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wickedfireReview:
It hurts to know I'll have to wait so long. But it's good anyhow.
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wickedfire] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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blueyesReview:
Oh come on! I hope to read more soon. I need it like a junkie!
Review By [
blueyes] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]