Oh that's mean! Are you going to detail the how it moves from chapter one to two? Because I really wanted to read that. Sigh. Each chapter a cliffhanger? Where is it going to go next? And is it going to go there soon? *hint*

Ooh cool. I don't recognize any of these names but I am interested in where this is going to go. It is a pretty cool challenge too.

An intriguing start, the descriptions were very vivid.

I'd like to read more.

um wow, love it so far all i can think to say is More please!

Very intriguing. Very powerful description, as always. Interesting to see what's next.

Still fantastic - and I'm going to have to second the great imagery of this passage:

"A small figure, coming not even to the shoulders of the Elves. A leaf-blade in each hand, wearing a gray cowl, a long tunic, and a girdle of silver stars—

Raising, now, a sword—

—and three hundred white-feathered arrows took flight."

Your writing style is simply perfect for this world.

Looking forward to the next.

Nicely done - when is this one set? Silmarillion? Hobbit? Ring War?

OMG.. and another LOTR/Buffy crossover!! WIth the first one I loved the description of Buffy and how she puts her finger against her lips... It adds to the mystery of ther person in the darkness and someone who is coming to help... I am assuming in the next chapter Buffy is leading the elves she rescued to help the dwarves... but what an entrance she makes!! I'm not familiar with the significance of the seven stars.. I really like how you are focusing more on the plight of those who are suffering and then introducing the rescurer in the final few sentences... It gives more of an impact because I felt sympathy for the warriors willing to die to let others lived and then their hope for salvation coming at a critical time... Can't wait for the next chapter!

woot! this looks pretty interesting! can't wait for the next chappy!

"A small figure, coming not even to the shoulders of the Elves. A leaf-blade in each hand, wearing a gray cowl, a long tunic, and a girdle of silver stars—

Raising, now, a sword—

—and three hundred white-feathered arrows took flight."

---I like the imagery here.

So, Buffy comes along and destroys the orcs and what not that were plaguing that group of Mirkwood Elves. She becomes a part of their group-apparently their leader considering the imagery above- and has now come to save the Dwarves from the orcs and what not harassing them.


Nice. So, the story is growing on me a little. But I'm still really interested to see what happens in SuvwI'.

Ah, end of the Third Age, then. Gone badly, too, if the Gate of Erebor was broken, since they were only besieged. Interesting, very interesting. Want more, please and thank you!

Daannnggg!!!! Please I need more.

More intrigued, more updates are requested.

I love your portrayal of Buffy in all your stories! I can tell this is going to be another great one. I can't wait to read more!

Really interesting start. Looking forward to more.