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BluejelloReview:
Congrats, you made me cry. Now, excuse me while I find some tissues...
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Bluejello] • Date [12 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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btvsfrkReview:
just like your new bones story . . . this ones is just as amazing. your voice is amazing too.
Review By [
btvsfrk] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SilverRoseReview:
Goddess. That was heaartbreaking and so, so very wonderful. I loved it :)
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SilverRose] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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StaciaReview:
Great story! You took what the writer's gave us and made it work. Do you think you'll be expanding the premise? I'd like to see what happens to Dawn in this universe.
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Stacia] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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mekaReview:
I was heartbroken myself at the end of the season. I couldn't believe it. I was in shock. Not Zach. Great story. Really enjoyed it.
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meka] • Date [18 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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amusewithaviewReview:
So sad. AND SPOILED! I missed the end of season three so you about gave me a heart attack. ACK! Yeah, I read the warning, but I didn't think it'd be THAT bad!!!
Danke
Comments from author:
I live to create cruel and tormenting works of writing to taunt you.
- D
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amusewithaview] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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angrymonkeyReview:
Cute little story, though one could ask whether or not Zack would have actually joined the cannibal if he had a steady girlfriend.
Comments from author:
In the show he mentions meeting Gormogon in Iraq, or just after getting back. I'm going on the idea that he was already the apprentice when he and Dawn hooked up.
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angrymonkey] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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CPTSkipReview:
Great story. I thought you captured a heart broken but much more mature Dawn perfectly. Not to mention what a nice job you did with the whole Bones' crew. Well done with a very melancholy story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. When I'm having a bad day I tend to write out really sad stories or chapters to get rid of the mood. This one did it ... at least until I just re-read it and went 'that's so sad!!' and felt like crying. I don't know if I should cry at my own fics ....
- D
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CPTSkip] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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kayleyReview:
That was brilliant. So sad.
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kayley] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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OrandaReview:
Totally unexpected cry fest over here. It was a really great story and I thought you did a good job with characterization. I always like to see Dawn outside the Scooby circle. Thank you for sharing.
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Oranda] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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kidkiliReview:
That was def my favorite of all the song fics you've written. You made me tear up. I'm going to have to break out my feel good music just to get back up, lol.
Comments from author:
Thanks, that means a lot because I'm trying to branch out my styles a little with this song fic series thing I'm doing. I dunno if I'm doing all that great a job at branching, but this was a new style I was trying and it makes me feel really good that people like it.
- D
Review By [
kidkili] • Date [17 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
