Good story. I like the way that the story has developed with Harry being frozen due to his being stranded in another universe. The way he grew and developed over the decades and centuries was well done and quite believable. His relationship with Ranewen was done very well. He absolutely would deny his feelings if he felt it could hurt her in any way. The more he felt for her, the more likely he would be to avoid her.

I do feel that his birthday presents were a bit over the top, a book that holds EVERY book in Hogwart's library, that was created by a 4th year, a brilliant 4th year, but still just a student, a trunk with every charm and feature available, paid for by a Weasley, a family well-known for their poverty, and the Alitum Globe, a near equivalent to a pensieve, provided by another Weasley, this one only 13 years old. Pensieves are very rare and expensive in canon and there is no reason to think that this artifact would be any less expensive.

Nit-picking aside, the items don't seem to be making the story unbalanced or weird, so I won't worry about them too much. Overall the story is very good and I am looking forward to the next update.

NeverTooOld

Great story!!!! You truly have a gem here.

Love it! Please keep going! Can't wait for more!

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