Very very interesting. I love it.

Oh boy, when Willow messes up, she doesn't just do it by halves does she...First she wipes Oz's mind clean of any and everything and then she sends Xander off to god knows where.

Hmmmm yes a spell to induce recklessness would interfere with free will, but only in a limited way. Poor Willow just dug a hole so deep I can't see her ever getting out of it as regards Karma. Or at least not in a multitude of lifetimes lol.

From what I see so far you are leading me to believe that Xander is/was the product of a lab experiment. Whose? I have no idea. Someone found him and stuck him in Sunnydale probably with the intent that as dangerous as it was that he'd die pretty quickly or at least wouldn't make it to adulthood.

It seems like from what the Atlantis people say that there was a lab on the planet that he ended up on. I'm guessing that that is where he was made, or at least where the people that he was made by or where his DNA came from lived when the planet still had an indigenous population on it.

I haven't seen any hints on who the future slash is in relation to and I'd really like to know if you are planning on making Xander gay. If so I'd really like to know that way I can stop reading this. It'd be a shame too since this is really good.

Some things you say are right and some are wrong. :) But you're good! You managed to pick up on a lot of things no one else has yet.
The first two stories of this series aren't slash- in fact, they're probably considered just general. It's the third story that starts having it. So, if you want, you can stop after the second one.

Wow. What an amazing idea in getting a Scoobie to the Stargate verse. I love Atlantis stories so I can't wait to go and read your sequel. Which I guess I'll go do now. Great work!

Wow! Super great! It was so enthralling, I read it all in one go.

Holy crap! What an ending! I loved this story and am looking forward to the sequel. I'm glad that you took things slow and developed all your ideas, rather than just doing a quick and dirty fic. It's actually good that Xander wasnt' in it that much.

Off to the next one...!!!!

Oh, thank you so much for the "reckless spell". I was pretty ok with your previous justifications when it came to what Willow did to Xander, but when it came to how she damaged Oz, possibly forever... Thank you for the reckless spell!

Again, I'm really enjoying your writing. And I was happy to see Angel, and also for Joyce's involvement.

I really do adore your characterizations, and am enjoying the telling of your tale.

I'm enjoying the fic. I like your characterizations and your writing style. And I was pleasantly surprised that, at least for the most part, I really bought in to Willow's reasoning. I get a little touchy when there is talk about Xander being the token human, but... I think you did a good job with a hard task.

I really loved Dru in this. I greatly look forward to more.

Looks like a good start to an excellent story... Off to read more

I like,I like! An incredible Willow story and now the Xander is coming. Right? The Characters
have all been wound up like nothing I've read in a while and the resolution for them is....?
there is hint that Willow is going to be mistrusted for years. I think a mental institution
couldn't relieve her self horror. This story is due a resolution much less a continuation.
Thanks for some excellent reading.

This was a great story and I look forward to seeing what happens next. I can't believe that Oz is a vegatable.


Thanks
Calia

Heh. People were asking why she was acting like Season 6 Willow and you found a good reason to justify it.

Poor Oz.

The gremlins/New Moon build-up from minor ongoing commentary to OH-NO moment was very nicely done :)

I noticed that with Joyce you switched between 1st, 2nd, and 3rd person for private thoughts. People generally use italics or punctuation marks to set personal, direct thoughts of the 1st/2nd person-type off from the rest of the third person narration, because that slight bit of separation alerts the brain to a possible oncoming change, making the text easier to read.

I never thought the possibility that Willow is under a spell. That's really surprising. At first I was very angry at her and now it turn to pity. It's a good thing that Buffy thought about that. Now, I'm off to read the next fic in this series.

I was about to hunt you down and force you to write more until I saw that you're making a sequel.