I like your story, but you would probably get more hits if your summary wasn't a run-on sentence.

Thank you for your comment I see what you mean. I will make the correction as soon as I can. I appreciate feedback.
Rory

Oh boy! What if Dawn doesn't agree to their wacky plan?

Oh well, then the story is over. Then Faith gets the boys :)

You do realize that dawn isn't a red head right? But hey other than that is is fine :)

Later and Love
Bunney

Thanks for writing. Yeah, I know she wasn't a red head, but I thought since was older she might change herself up a bit. Glad you are enjoying thus far chapter 2 is in the works. :)

Squee! Great first chapter. I loved how you characterized everyone, and I especially adored Dawn's automatic 'I agree with Sam!' upon awaking. Probably a good idea, he is almost always right. I have a hard time getting a mental picture of Dawn as a strawberry blonde instead of her normal brunette, but oh well. ;) I have no idea which brother I want her to choose, I love them both! :)

Please keep up the great work; I can't wait to see where you take things in the next chapter!

:) Thanks for taking the time to read and review this chapter. I am glad you enjoyed it. The next chapter is coming soon.

I'm not sure which brother it should be...I know - why choose? She could have both!

And maybe she she will... Thanks for your review.