I really enjoyed this. I would be interesting to read a sequel.

Which I'm working on.

I like this story alot and I am looking forward to your updates to the story line.But I am confused as to who kit and carlos are, can you tell me?

Kit and Carlos are actually friends of Dawn from the episode "Lessons". The first episode of the seventh season. We never actually see them again but she talks to Kit on the phone.

I loved it. Wished there were updates in their lives and maybe even a fic when they were all adults and had new siblings. These characters and the actors' portrayals are wonderfully inspiring to creativity

I'm glad you liked it. This story has a sequel. Had. *Had* a sequel. I'm having to rewrite it because my computer ate it. So keep watching because one day, there might just be a sequel to this one.

Oh you should write a sequel... or make this into a series.
I have a question though, could you write the full list of the kids that were sent there? Oh and did that lovely blond, cuddled besides Spike at that first day was Buffy. Because I really prefer Spuffy and there is something extremely repelling about Buffy with Angel.
And yes I know they are children here, but they will grow up. And when they do I wont be able to think about heartbroken William the Bloody. I mean Peaches was always better at dealing with pain.
OK, shutting up now. Just consider sequels alright?

There are sequels. I'm having to rewrite the next one, my computer ate it, so it's slow-going. But when it's finished, I already have the third one started.

The List: Angel, Willow, Cordelia, Oz, Doyle, Spike, Tara, Xander, Faith, Anya, Buffy, Fred, Gunn, Wesley, Andrew, Illyria, Dawn, Kit, Carlos, Dana, Connor, and Jordy. Shifu shows up as a gift. Cassie could maybe be counted as a kid, except she's in college.

And on the first day, the little blonde was Tara. Buffy was holding Xander's hand. And, for now, they're just kids. And I'm not sure who's gonna end up with who, yet.

this is truly well thought out and a fantastic read. love all the characters and getting to see old friends. well done. will there ever be more????

omg! are you sure this is your first fic? because really it's awesome. there isn't one thing I didn't love. my three favorite parts are 1) The girls and Teal'C. big strong warrior being bowled over by little girls. 2) Mama Vala and Papa Jack and 3) the whole fic in general.. more would be much loved because this is really good and really original

1) They're his little warrior women. It was one of my favorite parts to write.
2) The kids knew who they were coming to. This would be after Adria for Vala and Jack, always, misses Charlie. The kids knew what they needed.
3)Thank You:)

FANTASTIC!!! HOPE THERE WILL BE MORE SOON.

very good story. Really liked getting Janet back.
as for the computer eating the sequel, there is a reason Giles called them Dread Machines.

Too good to let it lie.

Well written with more than enough details to be continued.

Thanks

Lee

I'm working on re-writing the sequel but it's hard. My brain keeps saying "You've already done this" and wanting to go write something else.

more please! find the eaten chapter, I love this story.

[edit] who else wants to hear Teal'c's version of the shovel speech?

I want to hear it! Live in fear.

Brilliant!!!!

Could see this expanding a hell of a lot more, loved it!

Imagine the group descending on Atlantis one )

Gremlin

very cute story!

Very good story, I'm glad they finally got to retire.

Good story. I enjoyed reading it.

Whoa! That was amazing! Loved all of it! ...and a second part would still be cool.