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kayronReview:
I just finished reading and reviewing "What Have We Gotten Ourselves Into?", and found this story listed as the sequel. I enjoyed it. It was fun. I had to laugh when I read the 'Buffy had to pull her eyes from the shiny shiny weapons" line. I liked that everybody, after being dumped on for years, got a chance to make a wish. And, I like that everyone got just what they wanted, even if it wasn't exactly the way they wanted. Ron and Ginny got Fred and Geordge back. Harry got Sirius and Remus back. That was great that they got what they wanted most even though their wishes were for things that would help them end the wizarding war. It's good that Angel will get a chance to be a dad again. He deserves it. And I am really surprised that Spike wanted kids. Although he always did care for Dawn. Good story. I'm glad it's being continued as part of a series.
Comments from author:
I still haven't decided what they did to earn wishes. I mean, it'd have to be something extraordinary because you're right, they get dumped on and are never rewarded. At first, this was just going to be about the Slytherin five and their wish and when I got into writing it, I decided I couldn't just stop there so I finished out everybody's wishes. Slayers like weapons, the deadlier the better. I wanted to bring some people back for the Wizarding kids because, well, you've read "What Have We Gotten Ourselves Into?" Their folks aren't getting to be brought back and that just didn't seem fair. Connor's storyline has always been sort of Wha-Huh? for me. I mean, he was supposed to be a gift, right? Seriously, he was the gift from hell. I like Connor but they went through a lot for him, as an infant and as a teen. And Spike doesn't really like Angel to have anything he doesn't have. So kids it is.
I'm glad you liked it. And it actually wasn't supposed to be a series.
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kayron] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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erikthevikingReview:
A very well thought out story. Thanks
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eriktheviking] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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slmncpmReview:
i found this story by accident and loved it so much that i was crying about halfway through. thank you so much for writing this.
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slmncpm] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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malexandriaReview:
I really enjoyed this story, it was interesting to see what everyone wished for.
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malexandria] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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neverwillReview:
Good read. Was that a bit of foreshadowing for another story at the end?
Comments from author:
Smart cookie :)
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neverwill] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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kyzhartReview:
Interesting and appropriate choices for what they wish for. Very well written.
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kyzhart] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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kizunakatReview:
awesome story. I would love some back story as to how all the different groups got to that point. keep up the wonderfull writing. kizuna
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kizunakat] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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athenewolfeReview:
very intresting story - i enjoyed it
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athenewolfe] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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CaliadragonReview:
I loved it! It was very well done and I loved the fact that Xander ended up being a father while the others ended up with little brothers and sisters and new children were added to the family.
Thanks
Calia
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Caliadragon] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ShieldageReview:
Cute. Interesting Consequences.
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]