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lorwenReview:
cool story.
hope you plan to continue.
Comments from author:
I will. I'm just caught up with everything right now. My little brother was born last night.
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lorwen] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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WolfladyReview:
Oh, boy! Can't wait to see what happens when My Little Princess finds out.
BTW: Write all you want, but if you don't have any intention of finishing the story, don't post it. This site already has WAY to many abandoned stories.
Comments from author:
Oh, I will finish it. If I don't then I hand it over to someone who will. Sometimes it just takes a while for some inspirations to show up. That's all.
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Wolflady] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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DragonelfReview:
This story looks quite promising so far and I am already looking forward to read any future chapters you might get inspired to add to this story.
I wonder if Xander will meet run into anyone from the Hellsing organisation?
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
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Comments from author:
Yes, he will. Check out my new story "Nothin' to lose".
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Dragonelf] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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RobbyReview:
GREAT!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Should be soon.
Review By [
Robby] • Date [25 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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HolyKnightReview:
Oh shit...oh SHIT!!!!
This has me shitting bricks....and i can't stay still waiting for the next
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [
HolyKnight] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BigGReview:
Intresting Start, Im looking forward to reading more
Comments from author:
More is coming.
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BigG] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ReflectionsOfRealityReview:
A very, very interesting story. I don't know the the Sarafan Order at all but to be honest I don't need to as they are pretty self explaining once you set their context in this story. To introduce Paladin Alexander and Iscariot from Hellsing works beautifully and I really hope you can pull off this entire story line as it will be amazing to see where it will end up.
It would be nice if Xander is able to keep the PTB and the Elders from noticing the actions of his new Order and I really have to wonder if this is one of the timelines where demons are a dying race.
For some reason I can see the Iscariot being dissolved for political or legal reasons only to reform under Xander's order well that is if he is able to install a strong enough infrastructure before that time.
Can't wait to see what you write next,
~Reflections
Comments from author:
Just go to youtube and type in Legacy Of Kain cutscenes and you watch all of them and you'll get the general idea. Particularly Soul Reaver 1 intro.
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ReflectionsOfReality] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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RockyWilliamsReview:
Neat story so far. I think it might've been better to actually write out the confrontation between Buffy, Willow, and Xander. As well as the time of his change, but still an interesting start.
Comments from author:
Thanks but the problem with stories is the beginning.
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RockyWilliams] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ChiVayneReview:
Nice story. I like the team that Xander is planning to try to pull together. It is sure to bump up against Buffy and the others sooner rather than later. Giles and the Watchers Council will be in for a surprise when they find out just who is backing Xander up.
Comments from author:
Hell yeah! Is that a Legacy of Kain fan I hear?
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ChiVayne] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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BluesnowmanReview:
Great stuff.
Comments from author:
Thanks snow, I'm glad enjoyed it. For being such a faithful reader I'll let you in on a secret...I'm working on Clown Prince Of Justice, it should be updated by tomorrow or today as it may be.
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Bluesnowman] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
poor clem
Comments from author:
Amen.
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Bobboky] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
Great chapter, with an interesting use of Iscariot to help fund and back-up the fledgling Order.
Looking forward to developments.
Thanks
Comments from author:
Thanks, I pulled the Iscariot thing on the fly.
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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erikthevikingReview:
This is great. I hope to see how you develop Xander using a Knight's beliefs and training.
Thanks
Comments from author:
I'm hoping to.
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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banditobaneReview:
Nice LoK's Raziel in Sunnyhell. Wonder how it'll affect Xan after to night.
Comments from author:
Good question.
Review By [
banditobane] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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UrielTheBlackheartReview:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanx.
Review By [
UrielTheBlackheart] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Not Rated