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DemonaReview:
Absolutely beautiful.
A Goa'uld in the body of a Slayer is so very dangerous. The power Ra holds at his very fingertips is...potentially limitless.
I look forward to the next segment in this series.
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Demona] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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OrandaReview:
Really liked this story. Interesting character. I always thought those slave children around Ra in the movie were so captivating. Thanks for sharing. This good writing puts me in the mood for some Dark Glass. Hint, hint, nudge, nudge.
Review By [
Oranda] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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DragonelfReview:
Very Good!
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MacGyver: The great thing about a map:
it gets you in and out of places in a lot
of different ways.
- MacGyver (Episode: The Gauntlet)
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Comments from author:
Thank you!
***Nifty quote by the way.
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ShieldageReview:
Nicely done.
That should have consequences :)
I wonder if she'll go for the slay or ally plan concerning vamps...
Wait! Did she drown? Was another Slayer called or is this Post-Chosen? 'Cause, in her body, Ra could live for a long time...
Comments from author:
She died from the staff blast, but her body had less damage than *Ra's* so the symbiote went into Iput. This took place long before Chosen and yeah, this would have had consequences but the next story will be about an entirely different Slayer so we'll never know what happened. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fall of a Sun God" from
dharkcharlotteReview:
First!
you know i loved it!
Comments from author:
LOL You just like the violence. ;)
Review By [
dharkcharlotte] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
