Oh this is way beyond wonderful I really really love this fic so far. Dru is really cool in this fic you have made her "crazy" talk very understandable and really cool I am very much looking forward to reading more of this wonderful fic (feeding muse) more soon please.

Only defect I am taking off for is the brevity. Know it can't be helped sometimes, but still is annoying. Sorry.

Like the concept and the idea of Dru's like of Xander is maternal in nature. Will be interested to see just who you tie our Zeppo to in the SG1 command. Jack is used almost too much, but the minds are so alike as to be eerie. Daniel with his foster life would be an interesting reveal and possible a good connection to build on with his lack of real family. Would also be an interesting way of introducing the two if Dru has to be involved at all. Don't think you will, but would definately lead to an interesting dialogue. Sam has been done some, but am mixed depending on how you proceed.

Teal'c would just be mean, but oh what an explanation you would have to come up with.

General Hammonds been done too, but with the whole cousin he seems just a bit old for the role and this almost auto disqualifies Jack as well. Again I return to Daniel as it just would seem to fit better from my viewpoint.

May have missed the time setting, but it feels like mid season 4 which begs the question of what about Anya? Also the always played, but hopefully not here Initiative storyline is best ignored as Xander leaves so as not to muddy your process.

Will be interesting to see just how Dru had a child. Being as she is a vampire and the lack of living would put somewhat of a damper on it this should be a tough cookie. Hope you have it layed out ahead of time as it could become twisted and a royal pain if done on the fly.

Am looking forward to more and hope it flows well for you. Nothing worse than an inspiration that feels more like fighting you than writing with you.

excellent

I just found this story, and even though its only three chapters at the moment I really like how it has started. I look forward to where you take this. Thanks!

awesome

I really like the way you're writing Drusilla. I'm glad to see more of this story.

This is an enjoyable story. The idea of Dru having any biological kids is bizarre. Just because it's crazy Dru. But it's for that same reason that I will be reading more of this story. I'd just suggest that, if the updates are going to be this brief, there be at least two pages at a time. Interesting premise. I like it.

I caught the "generals town" remark, so I'm guessing there is some connection to general Hammond.
Good story.

How was Dru able to have children?

Interesting please update soon.

Intriguing!

I can't quite buy Drusilla as Xander's ancestor, since Angelus made such a big thing out of her being a virgin when he started to torment her and followed her to the convent she joined, in order to take her and turn her into a demon (and all of this happening more than a hundred years before Xander's birth, judging by the clothes).

But if you're just using that as a different way to get Xander to Colorado, then go for it, and I hope it works out for you.

Interesting little twist. I'll wait for more before saying more.

This is an interesting twist to a beginning!

interesting story with an interesting twist, very nice.
...But, I have one question. Is she like the matriarch of Xander's mother's line, sort of like the vamp lady in Queen of the Damned?

Interesting fic. Please post more soon