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ChristyReview:
Oh wow...I'm really enjoying this series so far...please keep up the excellent work.
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Christy] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
angrymonkeyReview:
Still following this like a rabid puppy attacking its master's foot. Hope to see more. Interesting twist making Anita an atheist, big departure from her first life. It was also neat to see how she died (I'm assuming that's what the first part of the chapter was about)
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angrymonkey] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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AllenPittReview:
hm...maybe she was dying in St. Louis and Jean Claude tried using magic to save her, and this resulted? clearly it's a different dimension...
I keep hoping she'll find someone who can train her in reanimation, the longer that talent goes unused, the bigger the backlash... she also needs it for self-protection. Properly trained, no slayerverse-type vamp would be much of a threat to her...
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AllenPitt] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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GoldenRatReview:
I'm really looking forward to finding out if Anita has been transported from the Anita'verse to the Buffy'verse or what?
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GoldenRat] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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GoldenRatReview:
I'm really looking forward to finding out if Anita has been transported from the Anita'verse to the Buffy'verse or what?
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GoldenRat] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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angrymonkeyReview:
Ah, that clears up whether or not Anita and Jean Claude are in the same world. I'm really crossing my fingers that Anita doesn't become estranged from her family like she was in the books, it always seemed like most of her neuroses came from having no familial support.
One question, was the missing store something from AB? It's been a while since I read the books and don't remember any non Jean Claude run businesses that were important.
Anyway, great chapter.
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angrymonkey] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "September" from
AllenPittReview:
Psychologist/counselor, not a good idea. Though I'm sure he'll come up with all sorts of 'reasons' for her 'problem'.
She really, really, needs to find somebody who can train her in necromancy--other wise it'll just build & build.. Maybe Jenny Calendar? (before she goes to Sunnydale to teach). That could be weird.
Comments from author:
I am going to lead to her needing training. Although Anita knows she's different she's still in a major case of denial. It blew up in Sunnydale, the dead man walking toward her in the alley, and the only reason it was kept mostly in control was her "feeling" out the dead. The major focus of this chapter would be the big case of disassociation she feels with St. Louis. She feels she has major problems, hence the wanting to see the counselor. She is going to get training, don't worry.
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AllenPitt] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
angrymonkeyReview:
Yay new story!
I think of the the AB stories on the sight this is one of the more creative ones, it's not just a rehash of Buffy character A hooking up with Anita Character B... Or Xander taking over the hyenas:)
Can't wait to see where you take it.
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angrymonkey] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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CalenReview:
Nice! Glad to see more of this. As for Anita not going to visit Xander... well could he just go and visit her on his own? Not run away, just go and see her since she can't come and see him. Convinently forgetting to tell his parents or anyone else.
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Calen] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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AllenPittReview:
She really really needs to find a mentor to teach her how to use her abilities...she can't not-use them, as Anita mentioned in the books, it'll just build & build.... plus of course we need to find out how she got here ....
So far the sunnydale timeline isn't that different, just with her spliced in... hm, and since she's growing distant from the family odds are Xander won't tell her about Buffy / slaying when that starts in about 2 years...
Necromancers in the Buffyverse can really be dangerous to vampires (there was an Angel ep with one) .....I await with interest, to see how this will go---
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AllenPitt] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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hellmouthprincessReview:
Yay, new story! Loved the last one and can't wait to read more of Anita Harris
Review By [
hellmouthprincess] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated