Review of chapter "The Brother Comes" from
miceddenReview:
your story just keep getting better i like how you make the Scooby grow up and see what do can hurt others with they actions but help them change for the better without makeing them all powerful superheros. so keep the good work
Comments from author:
The other idea for Xander in amrvel is he has a half brother named Curt Connors. Or his mother does...either way, he cares. And the one kind of joke he won't make is about amputees.
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micedden] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Brother Comes" from
JediLaSombraReview:
This seems interesting. liking it so far. Wonder where your going to take this.
Comments from author:
that makes two of us -JK-
I'm thiking the Mayor gonna be in trouble. Sergei can get him before the hundred days
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JediLaSombra] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Not Rated