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LedaReview:
I looove this story! @
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Review By [
Leda] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LoatrollReview:
Simply wonderful! *huge grin* My absolute favorite character in that game was Chesire Cat, he is simply so awesome, which makes this fic awesome as well.
Truly great stuff. Thanks for the great read.
Review By [
Loatroll] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LadeiaReview:
I love this story. Very interesting and well written. I really do hope you will write a sequel. I want to know how the others react to what Xander tells them and how them knowing the truth changes the groups dynamics.
Hope to see more soon.
Review By [
Ladeia] • Date [15 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LFWReview:
Amazing fic
Using the Jabberwocky was brilliant
Looking forward to more of this
Xander is a favorite character and having more Dawn, Dru and Giles is a real plus.
As is a dusted Spike
More Joyce would be great too
Thanks
Review By [
LFW] • Date [20 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AlexiDrakeReview:
Great story, please keep the side stories coming!
Review By [
AlexiDrake] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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kallipsoReview:
This is a Fantastic story. I love the way that you did things in it.
Review By [
kallipso] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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GoddessNyxReview:
More please. I love the way you wrote this. Is Dawn going to get anything of Alice back? A sequel would be awesome!!!
Love ya
Comments from author:
Since so many of you have asked so nicely (and boy was I floored by all the positive feedback - it had me glowing with pleased embarrassment), I am currently working on some side stories to try to fill in any gaps. Dawn's story will be first. I'll try to get it out as soon as RL will let me.
Thanks again for all the support! It means a great deal to me!
~ MavenAlysse
Review By [
GoddessNyx] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ShadowloverKReview:
Great story! I like Xander with multiple personalities and you pulled it off well. The Cheshire Cat as Halloween costume was inspired. Any plans for a sequel?
Review By [
ShadowloverK] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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TruthIsWhatUMakeOfItReview:
That was very good.
The only thing I would change is to take the extremely short chapters and merge them into larger chapters.
Again, very good fic. Is there any chance of a sequel?
Review By [
TruthIsWhatUMakeOfIt] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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shichanReview:
Please let there be a sequel in the works! :D
Review By [
shichan] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SusanAnthonyReview:
This was a wonderful story! The way you have Xander handling his mutilple personalities is so well done. I hope you plan a sequel as I'd like to see more of it.
Review By [
SusanAnthony] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
Cracking good story.
Thanks
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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MinaLynnReview:
This story was Brilliant seriously! Any chances of a sequel?
Review By [
MinaLynn] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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DofEireReview:
Nothing higher than a 10 is possible or that's what I would give this amazing rollercoaster ride of a story.
Review By [
DofEire] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AonGealachReview:
This is without a doubt the BEST story I have read in months!! Not only is it highly original, it is also a great representation of Xander and how he could have coped with all that had happened to him. I love the whole having Xander and Dawn trick-or-treating as Cheshire Cat and Alice. The Drusilla/Mummy relationship with Xander is displayed wonderfully here as well. I love how all of the pieces of Xander start to meld together once they realize they have to coexist or no existing at all. I really hope that you don't stop at this story. I hope you decide to continue it in a sequel and beyond if I am lucky. Love this and all your other work. Your avid fan!!
Review By [
AonGealach] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]