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FaithSummersReview:
Awesome! You know of course that Dean's really not that sweet...lol. Keep writing :)
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FaithSummers] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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daydreamerReview:
I really like it. I like the Dean/Dawn pairing and you really made it work.
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daydreamer] • Date [25 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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bannerReview:
That was sweet without being saccharine. The characters were interesting and believable. I enjoyed the way Sam stayed with Dawn, guarding her without getting in her way.
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banner] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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pcgalReview:
I loved this story! If you wanted to oh say write a follow up or a prequel, I would be first in line to read it!
Pretty please?? *big puppy dog/kitty eyes* (you know which ever one works best on you!)
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pcgal] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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kayarileyReview:
I really enjoyed this story. Little Dean is finally growing up. He's almost as emotionally mature as someone ten years his junior!
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kayariley] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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morgyairReview:
Loved the one shot! And while I would love to read more about Dean and Dawn I want more Dawn and House or Faith and Mikey or Dawn and John or Dawn and Ash.....please!
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morgyair] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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kribbyReview:
Nice story. Your Dawn reads like a real girl going through a crisis-- not like a charactericture of what we know she should be from the series. (sorry, spell check is failing me). I found it amusing that you had Dean and Sam going 'to piss' instead of going to the bathroom. That 'manly detail' was a nice touch in writing this from a manly p.o.v.
Nice work!
Thanks for posting!
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kribby] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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talsReview:
Lovely story, thanks for sharing. Sorry for the generic review, I'm way too tired (I have a cold) to make much sense, but I enjoyed the story, so Thanks.
Tals
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tals] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated