Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
kayronReview:
AWWW!! So sweet. I loved it! Considering how Harry grew up in cannon, this story is wonderful. Abusive relatives. Manipulative mentor. Whether Dumbledore meant any harm or not, he never put Harry's best interests first. The public in general were so fickle. One minute they cannonized him, called him the BWL, and hero. In the next moment they were calling him liar, murderer, and the next dark lord. Sirius and Remus couldn't really be there for Harry. Ron was a fickle friend. Everyone in the Miami family is loving and protective of Harry. I am assuming that since DC and Calleigh know something about the wizarding world, they will find a way to help him learn his magic. And I am SURE that this crew will be able to keep Dumbledore away. If nothing else, Hallie can hex him if he tries to interfere with Harry. Speed makes a great dad, and so will Horatio if what Hallie said is true. Between the two of them Harry will grow up strong enough to handle anything. This story is absolutely great and Ilook forward to future updates.
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kayron] • Date [3 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ObsidianDragonReview:
I loved Horatio's confusion when Hallie disappeared after saying Harry needed two parents. Who was Speed before he became speed? I can't wait to read more.
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ObsidianDragon] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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angeluscadoReview:
Muahaha, I love the not so subtle hint at the end of the last chapter. Whee!!
I love the fic, though. It's adorable, and very sweet and it had me cackling my head off several times per chapter. Please update soon!
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angeluscado] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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escagirlukReview:
Awwws, that little girl is adorable!
Though I may have just missed it, I couldn't see any explanation for practically everybody in the lab knowing about the Wiz world.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I'm not sure the muse knows why it seems like everyone knows the Wiz world. So far the only ones that have stated it are: Speed, Calleigh and DC. I figure Calleigh knows about that world because she's from New Orleans. As for Speed and DC knowing *shrug* muse hasn't gotten around to telling me that part yet. Sorry. Glad you're liking the story though. *grin*
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escagirluk] • Date [24 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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DeacBlueReview:
I really enjoyed this one. you did very, very well. Hope that the rest of the fic is as good. Only thing that didn't ring true is the way Halfrek is acting. As a vengeance demon, she should normally be more focused on avenging the problem, rather than fixing it, as she has apparently done on more than a few occasions in this fic-verse. Having said that, if she's a true justice-demon in this verse, more power to her! Tugged on the heartstrings.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. And yeah I know Hallie's slightly out of character by Buffyverse standards but I decided to go with the Justice Demon version of her rather than the fire and brimstone and incureable zits in places you don't want to think about Vengence Demon. It just works better that way plus made it sweeter. Thanks again.
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DeacBlue] • Date [4 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
springReview:
This is absolutely wonderful, I think that the way that Halie dropped that bombshell on H's head is excellent and it was a wonderful way to end that chapter. I love this fic so far and am extremely eager to read more of this fic.
Review By [
spring] • Date [26 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
BobbokyReview:
cool
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Bobboky] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
BobbokyReview:
Kinda would have been funny if "Hallie" had been given a different wish. Like if Harry had wished that she had become his new momma and been nice and played with him.
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Bobboky] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
volumeReview:
I love this story. I think that it is such a creative way to mix the three fandoms and Harry seems so adorable. I can't wait to read more.
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volume] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
spkReview:
Just found this...and I LOVE it so far. I love that you used Hallie and that she's connected to so many of the Miami family. Can't wait to read more. :)
Review By [
spk] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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christytrekkieReview:
I love this story. It kept me interested even though I have only seen 1or2 episodes of CSI Miami. And with a side of Buffy, love Hallie in this story.
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christytrekkie] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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mithrilandtjReview:
I like this story! It's so cute!
I've never seen CSI: Miami, just the CSI based in Vegas so I'll just have to trust you on the characters.
My question is: How do all these people know about the wizarding world or the supernatural?
When it was just a few who had dealt with Hallie, that's one thing. But them knowing about Voldie too is something else.
You really need to put an explanation in your story somewhere.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And the voices in my head that are telling me this story have promised me they'll explain the knowing about Wizards part of the story at some point. When that will be and who else knows is something I think they're still hashing out. *Grin*
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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BlueBooReview:
Sweet!
This story has made me cry and laugh. At first I wasn't sure about a HP/CSI-M xover, but this just works. Please, please, please... if you continue this story. Don't let Speedle die. Tell me he'll take better care of his equipment if he's got a little Harry Speedle to take care of...
Love your story!
Blue
Review By [
BlueBoo] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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CaliadragonReview:
I love this story and it is wonderful to see Harry with warm, loving people. I look forward to seeing Horatio and Speed get together.
Thanks
Calia
Review By [
Caliadragon] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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slmncpmReview:
oh i am really really loving this story! thanks.
Review By [
slmncpm] • Date [23 Sep 08] • Not Rated