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winnieReview:
Hehe, what a lot of fun especially the 5th chapter.
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winnie] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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BugeyedmonsterReview:
Ahh, being beaten by a woman... should be familiar territory for Graham.
(^_^)/
BEM
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Bugeyedmonster] • Date [17 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Technical Difficulties" from
GoldenRatReview:
Graham is such a great character who really doesn't get enough screen time.
Comments from author:
Completely agree, and not because I think he's nice to look at. No, not at all.
*whistles innocently*
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GoldenRat] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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SwedishFrogReview:
Just one question: Are you going to make this into an actual story or just continue doing these one-shots?
Either way the chapters are WAYYY too short.
Still good work tho :P
Comments from author:
The series will continue to be one shots, although I may do a longerish one about Riley and Graham's friendship.
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SwedishFrog] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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RippersGirlReview:
Cute :-)
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RippersGirl] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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morgyairReview:
Thanks for the early morning laugh
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morgyair] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
I think we all need a McGee at times.
Another good chapter.
Comments from author:
I could use a McGee all the time. I'd just chain him to my desk when I was wasn't using a computer
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eriktheviking] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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PATMReview:
Have Graham hold his own. Note: Graham was shorter than Riley in the series and therefore
he would be faster and sneakier. I think he would give a good showing.
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PATM] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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SamarkandReview:
Much better! Graham's quiet sense of humour and stoicism really come out when contrasted with Tony's slick manner.
Also, the Buffy reference, win. Especially with the image of Tony being beaten up by an irritated blonde Slayer. Although Faith might be more his speed, if not exactly the most likely of dates to escape unscathed.
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Samarkand] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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ShannaReview:
These are too cute. I love Tony's comment that Ziva's looking mean today, and Graham telling Tony Buffy could snap him in two.
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Shanna] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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KeiraFirestoneReview:
“She could break you like a twig.”
“Do you have her number?”
“Not gonna happen, Tony.”
Awesome
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KeiraFirestone] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sparring" from
fanofkaliReview:
Awesome
Review By [
fanofkali] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sparring" from
MhalachaiReview:
I really like how this is going. Great way to cross these two universes!
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Mhalachai] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sparring" from
erikthevikingReview:
Great humor, but not fair, it ended too soon.
Thanks
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sparring" from
warReview:
that should be a interesting work out. should be interesting to see if Ziva can pick up anything from his fighting style.
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [
war] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
