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KeshkreatureReview:
Very interesting plot. Putting more of the story through dialogue would be better, but it's not hindering the story that much. I like the idea of Willow taking care of Harry, although I wish the scooby gang hadn't abandoned her. Poor Harry gets all the rotten luck, doesn't he? Although Willow would be a bright spot if she wasn't hallucinating. So is what she's seeing just post-traumatic stress, or is someone doing this to her intentionally? I'd love to read more.
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Thank you very much. oh and someone is doing that to her. Wont say who... Anyway, I'd love some suggestions as to who I should Snape get all lovey dovey with...I am thinkin' Anya..maybe he will find her comments on sex amusing...
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Keshkreature] • Date [15 Aug 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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lckybrReview:
this has a good plot but you REALLY need to work on it some more, Maybe have the chapters longer than a few paragrahphs? Maybe easier on the eyes to...
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lckybr] • Date [7 Jun 04] • Not Rated •
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Review of chapter "Meeting The Maid." from
lckybrReview:
huh?
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lckybr] • Date [7 Jun 04] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of story "The Maid" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I don't really know what to tell you in response to your plea to not be abused by flamers, I never flame. I think this is a very cute plot bunny, and it's got lots of room to grow. Please, do nurture it?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Nov 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "The Maid" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Not bad...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [8 Nov 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "The Maid" from Anonymous Reviewer
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More please
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "The Maid" from Anonymous Reviewer
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The fic has a good plot idea, but it fails to explain why they would suggest Willow to nurse Harry.
How did Willow become a nurse, also known as a medi-witch in the hp universe, and why wouldn't
they simply call for someone like Madame Pomfrey?
Fix the plot hole and I think It'll improve, but don't give up.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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