Review of chapter "Undertow (Josh)" from
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I like the multiple-point-of-view thing, and I agree that you should eventually do Danny, but I think it's time for a woman. Amy comes to mind, or Abbey, or maybe Carol.
Whatever you decide to do, though, I'm sure it will be as fantastic as these first parts.
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exfilia] • Date [28 Jan 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of story "Near Wild Heaven" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Very good tale so far....
Suggestions for more POV pieces: Leo, Mr. Bartlet, Donna, Josh....
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "Near Wild Heaven" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I am loving this series. I got a big goofy grin when I saw that it had been updated. As for the POV of the next part - my first inclination was Josh. Then I started thinking about someone outside of the senior staff. What about Margaret? She must have a great vantage point to watch everyone go nuts. Or, what about Danny? His POV would make sense since the press has gotten the story. Well, I hope those ideas help. I can't wait for the next installment. Thanks!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "Near Wild Heaven" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Aha. Toby. Hmm. How will he take it? Hmm. I really would like to know. I'll wait patiently, for a little while. I like this story. It seems real.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "Near Wild Heaven" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Heh. Sam's POV reminds me of the time I told one of my cousins that EC and I are more than friends. Hey, you're going to do everyone's POV right?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [19 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "Near Wild Heaven" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Yay! Willow and Claudia Jean. I'm not one of those folks who thinks Willow should never be in a hetero relationship (hell, I wote a story like that), but I do love when she's paired with another person of the XX variety. You kept me guessing all the way 'til the end of the story. Who is this new paramour? I went through the list. Josh? Charlie? Donna? Toby? (Ew, ew, ew!) Ainsley maybe? I love CJ's internal monologue. Please continue this! Simply fab.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [8 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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Review of story "Near Wild Heaven" from Anonymous Reviewer
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>END?
No No No!!! You can't end it there! There are so many BtVS/WW x-overs with Wilow swinging back to the boy-lovin'. It's nice to see one that maintains her character.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [8 Sep 03] • Not Rated •
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