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MwhahahahaReview:
I really hope you come back to this story...it's pretty good...the last part of this chapter made me laugh quite a bit. I'd really love to read more!
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Mwhahahaha] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
Lovely ideas, and very well put together. I would very much like to see more. You have even managed to make old doom and gloom sound interesting. I have updated my tracking list just in case.
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purrfus] • Date [8 Dec 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ZEAReview:
Tear... a year without updates, this has the potential of being an incredible story, as well as original. I'm sad to see that it has apparently been abandoned. I've added it to my favorites so that if it is ever updated again, I'll know.
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ZEA] • Date [12 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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RachelKReview:
A really nice combination of whimsey, angst and plot you got going here. Looking forward to more.
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RachelK] • Date [2 Jul 05] • Not Rated
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LisaReview:
ROTFLMAO!!! Now this is good! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! *VBG*
Lisa
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Lisa] • Date [11 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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CountessMaryReview:
Only FOUR chapters... you're killin' me Smalls!
This was soo funny though. Shooting the Berty Bots... eeeeyuck. Can't wait to see what happens when they get to hogwarts!!!
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CountessMary] • Date [6 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
CountessMaryReview:
Oh the pink crayons just freakin' killedme!!! That was simply HILARIOUS!!!
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CountessMary] • Date [6 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
CountessMaryReview:
my poor giles... all the drama...
Still soooo good.
Review By [
CountessMary] • Date [6 Feb 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from
CountessMaryReview:
Trelawny!! Fabulous! I'm reviewing this one a chapter at a time... cuz it just rocks that hard already!!!
Kick the booty!
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CountessMary] • Date [6 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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MommadarReview:
Well I can say that you have definately caught my intrest with your story. Keep up the brilliant work.
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Mommadar] • Date [26 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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PhidanReview:
If for nothing else (and there are other somethings to admire), I have to love this story for the image of Faith stuffing her mouth with an assortment of Bott's Beans and being forced by her own pride to swallow them. You described that, and the reactions of Giles and Hagrid, with such talent that I laughed till my face hurt. What a great chapter of an original and entertaining story.
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Phidan] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DarklightReview:
Interesting start of your fic, keep Faith single and with Hagrid as a friend. get her some magical unic creature as pet, one of a kind.
Don't get Faith and Willow just to go along with what ever Dumbi cooked up for them.
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Darklight] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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RachelKReview:
Another good demonstration of characterization under pressure, and in character for those who aren't necessarily so.
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RachelK] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Not Rated
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restiveReview:
I was a little reserved about this fiction. I did like that you've inserted Giles into the Potter-verse in an interesting and unique way. Sybill's brother! Good idea. But what really sold me on this now was the Bertie Bott's beans. Typical Faith, and just a wonderful small addition to the story that gives it a sense of fun it might not otherwise have. Even though you've set this up as a Willow pairing, I'm really looking forward to following Faith's progression. Great job!
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restive] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Not Rated
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RachelKReview:
You answer the questions in chapter 2 with very delicately crafted characterization answers in chapter 3. Refreshingly unexpected ones, and nicely written.
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RachelK] • Date [23 Jan 04] • Not Rated
