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NessannReview:
Very interesting story! YA got a follow up for it yet on how he finds his kid. I am guessing it was Draco not Potter who was the father...LOL on him. Anyway great job!
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Nessann] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
This was so much fun. I've always been surprised at how much I enjoy well written dumb and cute Harmony.
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purrfus] • Date [12 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ImmortalReview:
I loved the concept, and the story! You've done a fantastic job :)
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Thank you. I'm trying as best I can to write the chapters on Harry Potter and the Return to Hogwarts, as somebody from this story will make their entrance there. Sadly, not yet...
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Immortal] • Date [18 Aug 04] • Not Rated
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FMaguireReview:
I got a little confused at the beginning, but it worked out. Um, I haven't read on, but it seems that this is Draco's kid. I have personally thought that the name Fiona Malfoy was the best ever and was thinking of writing a fic about DM's daughter Fiona. Now I don't have to. Maybe... I think I tricked my muse... OK, um, keep writing?!
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Ah, but you see, at the moment Fiona's name is Fiona Potter, because Draco didn't mention his name, only Potter's... Just imagine the uproar when Fiona gets to Hogwarts and Draco discovers that Faith has named his daughter Potter... *smirk*
Thanks for reviewing.
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FMaguire] • Date [10 Apr 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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DarklightReview:
Loved the harmony bit, keep her on the straight and narrow and not go over to the darkside.
The poor demon that got stuck into Harmony when she got sired, harmony is in control, and the vamp gets almost no time to come out and play vampire.
Always thought that Harmony didn't stay with Cordy a shame, she would have added much fun to Cordy's live, keeping an eye on harmony would have been full time job and give Cordy some kind of live again beside sitting at home every night.
Keep the chapters coming and more Harmony.
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Don't quite know how many more chapters there will be, at least two. I'm not sure how much Harmony's going to figure in it, though.
Thanks for reviewing ;)
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Darklight] • Date [6 Apr 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "The Dragon's Angel" from Anonymous Reviewer
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more chapters and get Faith to her daughter.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Dec 03] • Not Rated •
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Oh please Please PLEASE don't abandon this!!!! It's much too good. But I'm a tad confused. Did Faith think that Draco's last name was Potter, and therefore take the name as her daughter's and her own? Or is Faith a Potter? *pulls at hair* GAH!!! I'm so confuzzled. Please update and explain!
-Face
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Review of story "The Dragon's Angel" from Anonymous Reviewer
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ooo! Peter Rabbit =D well written, Anne
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I really enjoyed what you'v written so far, and i cant wait for more:)
Now, as to books that he would read? Peter rabbit would be a definite.. and I kinda think that a scene from the show *M*A*S*H* would work great as far as another story time style for wesley would be. The scene i mentioned was one where colonel potter has to babysit an infant, and rather than read his zane gray cowboy novels to her/him, he picks up and reads her the step by step instructions on field stripping and cleaning a .45 lol..
So after reading this, what i mean is(since potter was military, and wes is a demon hunter/watcher), he might just read her a copy of " Demons: the Good, the Bad, and the Ugly" :) dunno why, but that just seems so dysfunctional, it really works for btvs lol.
-Tremerid
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [14 Dec 03] • Not Rated •
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Very good. Although I'm wondering when you'll get the 'unknown' father back in, and how this is connected to the return to Hogwarts...
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Oct 03] • Not Rated •
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I mentioned that I like this story, right? Just wanted to make sure you knew. And more Faith would be a very good thing, in my opinion. =]
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [24 Oct 03] • Not Rated •
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Interesting. whats up with the chapter titles?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Oct 03] • Not Rated •
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Oooh! I like. More please? OK, so I'm not really as illiterate as that makes me sound. I am just a huge Faith fan and am always excited to see new promising stories that include her. I am looking forward to getting to read more of this storyline.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Oct 03] • Not Rated •
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Faith POTTER?????
Okay, you've got my attention. Lovely idea, hope it works.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Oct 03] • Not Rated •
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It's not a prequel if there's not the story here. o_O
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Oct 03] • Not Rated •
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