Reread and still love it. Please update and finish.

Love it, please add more soon!!!

Pearlmegan :)

I really enjoy this story! It's nicely written and a great plot.
Waiting, waiting, waiting for the inevitable Willow/Spike hook up...and am glad that you are developing it so nicely. I also like all the other blooming relationships you're writing.
So, um, yeah. Thanks so much for the update and I look forward to more!

OK.... How long are you going to continue to interrupt poor Spike and Willow???? GRRRRR!!!! I do like the hinted pairing of Luna and Harry. She would unsterstand him in a way no one else could. And do I see a possible pairing between the Key and the Miracle Child????? Hmmmm... Oooh, do I foresee oodles and oodles of fun to come... I do love this and I hope to see more soon.... And why hasn’t this been updated since April???? >8~{
One thing tho... Partway thru Chapter 12, Ron says that Lockhart had them training against Bogarts. Just to let you know... That was actually Remus in PoA that actually taught them about that.

This story is wonderful. I really like the way that you've connected Willow into the Black family. I don't think I've seen that before and it's a really good idea. I really like the way you've got Willow and Spike relating to each other and I'm very much looking forward to seeing what happens when they reach Hogwarts. Plus you've got Luna which is great!

Thanks for writing such a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.

I enjoyed this chapter, and wasn't expecting another one so soon.
I hope that you either write missing scenes or flashabacks for Severus
and Willow having a truce back at the manor... and then more than just a truce,
as well as hanging out more with Hermione, Harry and Ron

An interesting resolution to the tension of the last chapter. Not all resolved, but a few moments of peace, a few of comfort,
a few of explanation, and then perhaps more chaos to come.

Lovin' this story more and more! Also, thanks so much for not dragging out the Willow/Harry first meeting. Sometimes I get so cranky with the constant cliffhangers but after this chapter I felt freakishly satisfied. THANKS! Can't wait for more, you're doing an awesome job.

ooooh. Intense and interesting at the close, very well characterized and dialoged through-out.

::frown:: I'm slightly confused...Dumbledore knew who Willow's father was, and instead lied to her by saying that he wasn't sure who it was...Is that right?
Oh, Sirius's daughter...Now that's bloody interesting...I look forward to more!! Which means, the next chapter...That I shall read now. :)

o boy what a diversity of family relation willow comes from, get Willow to keep to her demands and not get into the war with Voldie and only teach them how to fight.

Liked the small part with Harmony Cordy and Willow, get Cordy and Harmony to come over and visit even thought the can't.

Keep the chapters coming

Your story has a sweetness and a sharpness to it. I like how you are exploring Spike, who was always more attached to strong human emotions than the other vampires we met. Even without a soul, we could see he had love in him as an emtion. Granted it was for Dru the loopy, evil, sociopathic vampire, but still...
I hope you give Willow the chance to have a romance with Snape, since he didn't turn out to be her father. I like Spike's affection, but he seems very much of the moment, even with the soul-having. Unless he does turn out to be the Shansu and becomes human again in your story, that is.
Wouldn't mind a love triange either, though. Anyhow. Thanks for adding so much, so soon.

Okay, I think I got it. Some really nice scenes and interactions in the last two chapters.

Excellent lead-in. Love Cordelia's line about hating Spike before but liking him with the "Willow loving." And the response to the pillow fight! Kittens! Just finished watching Angel from a couple of weeks ago when Spike looked not so fresh (you know what I mean!) so I really needed that.

One short problem-you mixed your context a bit when you are explaining the lineage. Since TR (gp) and TR (unc) have (obviously)the same name, you need to reword that portion to make it clear to any non-readers of Potter books how she fits.

You are weaving an interesting mystery, but please tell us (when you get to that part) that at least one of her parents are cannonical.