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Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Impending Reunions and Tragic Consequences" from mithrilandtj
Review:
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [4 Jan 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Impending Reunions and Tragic Consequences" from KatieMarrie
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This story is amazing!! I love it!! Update soon!!


Please. . .

Katie
Review By [KatieMarrie] • Date [21 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12: Impending Reunions and Tragic Consequences" from PhilH
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Great section, and I'm very glad to see more of this story. More soon please! (Oh, and go Xander and Ginny! )
Phil
Review By [PhilH] • Date [25 Feb 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flirting" from LadyCarpathian
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I like this. I love the Xander-Ginny setup. So very Ginny!!! And somehow, I can just see Willow waking up in Vegas married to a stranger, very Willow of her. Hope to see more soon.
Just a small critique for you... You might want to have an AU disclaimer about Willow-Kennedy in the story notes or insert a couple of lines about the demise of her relationship with Kennedy in the first chapters. That way, no one thinks she was cheating on Kennedy in Vegas.
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [21 Dec 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flirting" from Lilly
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nice, nice. :) I like rat Lucius... *snort* will be watching for more. *g*
Review By [Lilly] • Date [9 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flirting" from RachelK
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And fun flirting of the adult kind it was. Interesting plot twist along with develpoing the relationship plots. thanks for sharing!
Review By [RachelK] • Date [7 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Overrated Peril" from RachelK
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Some nice future fic speculation, good characterization and plotting here.
Review By [RachelK] • Date [7 Nov 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories" from Keshkreature
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Hehehe. Yummy. Love that last part. Deffinately looking forward to more. Doesn't seem like plagerisim (sp?) to me. Their relationship is really cute, and love the turning Malfoy into a rat part. Kinda hoping you'll write more about Xander and Ginny too. Very enjoyable read =)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [7 Aug 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confrontations and Serendipity" from Sterling
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This continues to be entertaining and fun to read. I really hope you continue on with this fic. I've had a blast reading this so far. Thanks.
Review By [Sterling] • Date [16 Jul 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Untimely Meetings" from Sterling
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You are continuing to write a good and fun story. Also I must add that you took care of that formatting problem that plagued the prologue, which is of the good :) My only gripe is you having Xander as Hermione's cousin. You have enough serendipity going on as it is, with Willow interacting with the wizarding world and destined to meet Harry. It seems having Xander as a cousin is stretching the bounds of verisimillitude a tad to much. But still this is a fun story and I am enjoying it quite a bit.
Review By [Sterling] • Date [16 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up Sober" from Sterling
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Good story, amusing premise and dialogue. This was a very fun opening chapter. I have one teensy complaint though and that lies in the formatting of your story. The gaps between the paragraphs were huge. It made this otherwise cute and fun story difficult to read. I don't know why you chose to add all of that blank space in this story but it really does not help it. It doesn't really do anything for the story and it makes the flow of the story stutter along as your eyes have to cross these huge gaps to keep on reading. But honestly that is just a small comment and is probably more of a comment of my personal tastes. Great work on this one and I look forward to reading more.
Review By [Sterling] • Date [16 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Confrontations and Serendipity" from AnnOfMidnight
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I like this fic and am still reading. I like the woke up married fics and having two kids myself, I understand Willow's getting it on. Not only are the hormones insane and we've got twice as much blood rushing through our bodies but after the baby's born it's going to be so long before they get any, they'll think they'll never do it again!
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [18 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Waking Up Sober" from (Moderator)Jinni
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If anyone else says this fic is like AMM and gets snotty w/you just direct them to this review. This is a very cute fic and I've said all along that I *LIKE* to see people do the whole waking up in Vegas married thing. Hell, I've done it in 4 fics myself. *snicker* It's a fun thing to play with and I think this is a decidedly lovely take on the whole thing. I'm going off now to add the "Woke Up in Vegas" challenge to the Challenge section, though, just so people can say "hey - look, challenge" and not scream plagiarism.
Review By [(Moderator)Jinni] • Date [17 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Overrated Peril" from MsLessa
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Evil cliffies... *grumbles* mean author to leave us hanging like that. *long sigh* I hope your muse comes back with a vengence and doesn't leave us waiting forever to find out what happens next. :) Keep up the good work.
Review By [MsLessa] • Date [8 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Overrated Peril" from WitchyGrrl
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Pregnant Willow gettin' laid...GO HER!!! :)
Definitely looking forward to the action...The fighting, hex-flying action, I mean...::smirk::
Review By [WitchyGrrl] • Date [7 Jun 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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