Review of chapter "The First Touch" from
SweetdoggieReview:
Gee, this is a great story, too bad you haven't finished it. I'm just getting into the Buffy/Snape pairing and I kind of like it.
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Sweetdoggie] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Touch" from
KnightOwlReview:
Please, please tell me you are going to finish this story! It is so good! Your writing style is incredibly good. I like all of the detail you put into the story. I was dying for the two of them to come together but all of the back story was told really well. I love Sirius being Snape's guide and banter between the two. Snape's snarkiness is written so perfectly. I could definitely see him being irritated with Xander and I liked his anger with Willow for taking his soulmate away from him. I really loved him seeing into Buffy when she was bandaging his arm. I really would like to see more of this story, please don't leave it there!
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KnightOwl] • Date [3 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dead Ends" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Ebay master? *snorts* lol
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PrincessTai] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It Needs" from
PrincessTaiReview:
>>Black had become something of Snape’s personal cheerleader, much to Snape’s chagrin and horror
Must say I agree with that one lol. But solely to an extant.
It's funny :-D
I must say this entire chapter was interesting, a learning experiance if you will.
Wicked cool. Reminds me of World Religion class and watching Charmed.
Every freaking thing is connected. Uber spooky and yet uber cool
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PrincessTai] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Awakening" from
PrincessTaiReview:
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! *squeals!*
This was MUCH better than I expected. And I expected a lot.
Oh this was perfect, the whole soul-mate thingy. And he and Black are friends and James and Lily too. I just KNEW they'd be friends if they'd all been in the same House and weren't such stubborn fools *sighs* They are so funny together. It's good to see them back and forth and have Black's chipper banter against Sevvi's dry, sardonic comments.
I just love it!
Will Cordy be Sirius'?
I mean she is the only one who dies other than Buff.
Makes sense too and it'll give Sevvie a chance for payback lol
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PrincessTai] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
PrincessTaiReview:
You know I just ran through the whole thing, skimming.
I was just so damb excited of the IDEA of it. It seemed super cool
And I must admit, turned out to be rather funny. A eunuch indeed :-D
Now to calm down and try to take in the plot. This really does seem like a great idea and is interesting thus far. Can't wait to read the rest!
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PrincessTai] • Date [21 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The First Touch" from
fireflyReview:
I love what I've read up to this point, and am very sad to see it's been a year since you've updated. That's a shame, because this story is very good. I hope you decide to take it up again, someday.
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firefly] • Date [20 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Touch" from
purrfusReview:
Great story. I really liked Snape being the one to go to the other reality. It's nice to see him spending time adjusting, and his POV almost makes me like him enough to be glad you gave him a guide. The presentation is really good, both the pacing and the overall mechanics. Even the brief glimpses of Snape / Buffy are making me feel sorry for Angel.
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purrfus] • Date [22 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The First Touch" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
That was delightful. I really REALLY want more! Please update soon. I love this story so much. Great Buffy/Snape interaction. (Also-Snape's POV on the interaction made it all the better)
PLease update soon. Thanks for writing this. >.
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flight" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
That was great. (Got a little impatient. Had to see this part.)
I don't like Kennedy, but she seemed alright in this fic, so I feel sorry for her and Willow.
Hm. Like Snape's interaction with the scoobies, though I bet it's going to strain his budding relationship with Buffy.
Great chapter!
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Be Ready" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
I liked both pov's. Snape computer shopping/learning, and Buffy with the homedecorating/dreaming/forboding feelings.
Great chapter! Happy. Can't wait to see Buffy and Snape meet up. I bet they meet up next chapter at demon bar. (Hope so!)
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Things That Go Bump In The Night" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
Cool. I liked this chapter-interesting how Snape enjoys the witty reparte, and anger relieving rants, when dealing with vampire scum.
I can see Darkness going to Buffy in Snape form and causing suspicion and strife. I hope that doesn't actually happen, though. Great chapter!
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Darkness" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
Little slow in the begging. I predict this girl Snape's going to dance with is evil. That's just the kind of luck Snape/Scoobies have. Good chapter, though. (Like how Snape shops and what not.) And-Robin Hood Black makes me happy!
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It Needs" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
No,no, I love the Snape time. I think you do a wonderful job with his POV-very amusing and interesting. Loved this chapter- and the way Sirius jumpstarted Snape into action was great. Oh, one thing I didn't understand was when Snape thought, "Still disoriented, Snape's mind could only focusing on getting to Potter and getting the boy out through the mirror"-I don't get it. What mirror?
Also, I was expecting Buffy to be the one getting the backlash of the bliss cracking, but I guess it makes sense that Willow does-since she's the one who started the cracking in the first place. Hmm.
Great chapter! Really loved it!
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BlameyFomorrii] • Date [26 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Awakening" from
BlameyFomorriiReview:
Aww. The police can't hold him for long. He hasn't had drugs-no proof, either. They haven't read him his rights. They could get in big trouble if they kept him.
Poor Snape! I feel so sorry for him. Love how he interacts with Black and the muggles. Great chapter.
Review By [
BlameyFomorrii] • Date [26 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]