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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from pezgirl
Review:
Read this a few years ago, no idea why i never reviewed.
anyway, i loved reading this story; it was one of the first fics i read.

thanks for sharing the story, it was brilliant (:
Review By [pezgirl] • Date [12 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Ansku
Review:
Cute, but needs some serious formating before it can really be enjoyable.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [4 Dec 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from TamoraCardboardMoon
Review:
Where is Xander in all this? Huh? HUH???

...and there should've been a comment about Tara Malfoy's middle name in contrast to Willow's born religion (Not everyone worships Santa!).

Other than that, I loved this story. I read about halfway through yesterday until I thought I was gonna fall over, I was so tired - and I picked it up again today. SO. GOOD.

Post more stories!!!

Ta!
~The Cardboard Moon
Comments from author:
i have more stories silly, lol. im glad u liked i love that u liked it thank u for taking the time to review
Review By [TamoraCardboardMoon] • Date [11 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from collectivetears
Review:
this is pretty good...
Review By [collectivetears] • Date [21 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chance" from ladyshiva
Review:
I loved this chapter, it's a great lead in to the rest of the story, which I'm looking forward to reading much much more of. Kudos.

bex
Review By [ladyshiva] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chance" from evilelvengoddess
Review:
I really liked this fic.
^_^

great job on it.

My only suggestion [not just on this fic] is to add spaces between your lines...Otherwise they run together and get hard to read.

But other than that, I loved it!
Review By [evilelvengoddess] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (2007%20Donor)kribby
Review:
Good work on this! Your story was quite good!
Review By [(2007%20Donor)kribby] • Date [8 Jun 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from dixid
Review:
Great story, but I think you made a typo regard Sammy's bed.

A canapé bed would be one made of an appetizer consisting of fried or toasted bread or crisp crackers topped with seasoned spread of fish, meat, cheese or salad combinations.

Canopy bed, maybe? I had to giggle.
Review By [dixid] • Date [8 Jun 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Dreamer" from Ezmerelda
Review:
Very sweet ending for that last chapter! Or was it the end of the story?

In any case, Draco, Samantha, Willow and Tara make a loverly family. Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [29 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day Dreamer" from Jess
Review:
Please tell me you're not done yet. I want more chapters! Pretty please? This is a great story. I have to say though, I highly doubt Draco would ever grow a beard. Scruff maybe if he was really distraught, but not a full on beard. I want more!
Review By [Jess] • Date [28 May 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Battle" from TarnishedGold
Review:
ROFL - Although I see your sentiment .... A Jewish/Wiccan naming their child CHISTian??
Comments from author:
it's not Christain is Christan, adn Willow's not ur traditional jew
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [24 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Battle" from sapphire
Review:
Please, please write some more.
Review By [sapphire] • Date [23 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Battle" from (2006%20Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Over the past few days I've read your entire tale thus far and it is quite the joy ride -- this from someone who is very picky and often only reads one chapter of HP fics before never picking them back up. I love that this is a post Sunnydale fic -- It adds so much more depth and possibilities for Willow and the Scooby interactions. And, your older HP crew is working well into the mix. I'd love to see a bit more focus on the inner thoughts of your characters and I missed how everyone else figured out Draco was the father when Willow only told Faith - but other than that I look forward to more!! Also, I vote for none of the above on the name. She's a girl and therefore I vote for Tara (who did help save her life after all) and/or Joyce thereby naming her after Willow's surrogate mother.
Review By [(2006%20Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [26 Apr 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Battle" from Ezmerelda
Review:
So, it looks like Willow is the "power the Dark Lord knows not."

Great story, I think you should name the baby Tara Christen.

Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [25 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The meeting" from RachelK
Review:
Curious -- did they call it a magic school instead of a wizard's and witches school to hide some of their nature, or is it au, or a simplification?
Comments from author:
i don't knwo what u mean, technically hogwarts is a school for witches and wizards and they do magica so it would eb a school of magic....
Review By [RachelK] • Date [24 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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