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SlayerKatyReview:
Really cute!
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SlayerKaty] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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springReview:
This is just WAY to funny I love it.
Review By [
spring] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AriaDragoncrestReview:
Good.
Review By [
AriaDragoncrest] • Date [16 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ziliReview:
I had actually read your parent trap story before i read this and i think it compliments it nicely
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zili] • Date [21 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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AmarantheaReview:
"The chainsaw is coming out, soul or no soul."
How fun! Angel's take on Buffy's inherent (and not necessarily faulty) selfishness was interesting. Having to take care of someone, be fully responsible for them, as Buffy is for Dawn, is an exhausting and, well, let's face it, sometimes unfullfilling prospect. So I liked how you wrote about Buffy trying to do something "unselfish" for Dawn, letting her go off to Europe all on her lonesome, which was actually giving Buffy a break from trying to help Dawn get all of her ingredients together. Don't get me wrong, I think Buffy is a terrific character---and your fiction showed off one of the often neglected (by fanfic writers) aspects of her personality---her obliviousness. Thanks so much for writing!
A terrific job, especially for a first time writer! I look forward to the Parent Trap challenge story you're writing!
Review By [
Amaranthea] • Date [14 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
