Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from
julzReview:
intresting, I'd like to read more about the twins, be careful about adding too many original charactrs at once
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julz] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from
SpacedCadetReview:
So far, very good!
More please.
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SpacedCadet] • Date [22 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from
PrincessTaiReview:
>>>Cordy was right. We hooked up with the only person who ever came to L.A. to get old. And he was absolutely happy about it.
*snorts*
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PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Robots and polyjuice" from
PrincessTaiReview:
One is so Dawn the other is so Harry.
How very cute lol :-)
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PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twins found" from
PrincessTaiReview:
lol Can't live with them, can't survive without them. Indeed. So agree with that.
Dom's a Malfoy and Joy, is a Harris (Either Xan's and Anya's or Xan and Faiths) lol
But what of the rest?
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PrincessTai] • Date [9 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from
purrfusReview:
I've seen some HP/Dawn before but this is fun. Hope you come back to it someday.
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purrfus] • Date [26 Oct 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Happenings of Hell-A" from
DawnieReview:
I Love it keep writing PLEASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE it's really really good so far
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Dawnie] • Date [13 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Robots and polyjuice" from
MariaReview:
*snickers* Oh, this is good. There's little inaccuracies that are driving me nuts though. Dominic and Dominique sound the same but Dominic is the male version and Dominique is the female version. You use the female version when referring to a male. Okay, I think that was my main issue. Please continue because this isn't that bad.
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Maria] • Date [16 Jul 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twins found" from
AmarantheaReview:
I'm so glad that you posted this! I am *really really really* curious as to who's children everyone at the Hyperion was. . .I can't wait for Lilah and Ang to meet. I also liked how you made it so that the girl Harry has acts like Dawn and Dawn's daughter acts like Harry.
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Amaranthea] • Date [17 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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AkaleaReview:
Well I'm glad you decided to do this, I was thinking that if someone else didn't, I would. Hehe. But anyway, good start but you can definitely tell that you wrote this really early in the morning, perhaps just re-read over your spelling and punctuation. (From memory, you accidently missed a few full stops, and had a few spelling errors, such as, Hermione)
Can't wait to see more :)
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Akalea] • Date [17 Jun 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twins found" from
KiaraReview:
Thanks for writing. Great idea and it has a different pairing to other responces i've seen.
Review By [
Kiara] • Date [17 Jun 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
