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amusewithaviewReview:
All I have to say is:
Heh heh heh - what kept them?
Danke
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amusewithaview] • Date [22 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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dogbertcarrollReview:
I like it.
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dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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msandReview:
Yes! Muggles rule.
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msand] • Date [26 Aug 04] • Not Rated
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HecatonchiresReview:
Very cute
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Hecatonchires] • Date [20 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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NatalaReview:
Very nice, it was a great thing to see. It put a bright smile on my face and made me proud of the characters. Very good job.
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Natala] • Date [18 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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WormbaitReview:
Oh right Joe and I assume you gave this response to every person who posts a one page fic? God some people annoy mewith their self rightous drivel.
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Wormbait] • Date [18 Jun 04] • Not Rated
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JoeHundredaireReview:
Perhaps I should ask Jinni to post a definition for a drabble somewhere. I somehow doubt that trying to pack the death of Voldemort, something about a Druidic and Wiccan Council, along with a Slayer's Council and the upcoming trial of the entire Wizarding World counts as something that's acceptable to make a one-page fic out of.
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Oh right Joe and I assume you gave this response to every person who posts a one page fic? God some people annoy mewith their self rightous drivel. I was in no way intended to be a drabble as anyone who knows what a drabble could tell you, it's a story, and if you don't like it then don't read it, but kindly keep your negative oppinions to yourself.
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JoeHundredaire] • Date [18 Jun 04] • Rating [1 out of 10]
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ravenReview:
Bravo! Like you, I have read many examples of the British Ministry inflicting it's beliefs/judicial system on other magic users. Willow, is of course, a favorite; but others have been written. Most enjoyable story.
A few questions, am I correct in guessing that the men in brown robes are the Druids and the women in green dresses are the Wiccans? If this is the case, I must protest-Druids have a history of equality stretching back before the Romans invaded what was the Celtic lands just as Wiccans have a history of male and female leaders. While it makes it easier to divide among gender, that is hardly the case. It would be lovely to get some sort of clarity on this-is this a specific battle group/tactical force/representative of different governing bodies...etc?
Just as I protest the jurisdictional issues of Fudge prosecuting Willow, are these Councils worldwide? While they have the right, do they somehow have the authority to do so? Or is this more of a big brother policing action (ie-we are the only ones big enough/strong enough to fix it, they asked us to help, etc.)?
Also, many of the groups you mentioned are muggle-how did they get through Hogwarts wards without wanting to get to a missed appointment?
On the Quidditch pitch...hehe-so many final battles are set there. Poor field will never be the same.
Lucius lost his hand...lol. Maybe Peter will loan him his?
While I love the idea of Voldie being chopped, that could be handled a bit better. You don't charge someone and then execute them outright-due process and all that. Maybe Voldie was previously charged/sentenced in absentia? A prequel might round this out nicely-what took them so long to act, how these three groups got together, planned the attack...much cleaning of glasses by Giles...
Wonderful story...wouldn't mind seeing more. Perhaps with our favorite villains/oddballs? Would be lovely to hold the Wizarding World accountable for their poor treatment of other magical creatures (werewolves, centaurs, house-elves...). At the very least Lucius/Fudge/Umbridge/et al could be tortured for our enjoyment!
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raven] • Date [18 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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thecynicReview:
Beautiful, I loved it.
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thecynic] • Date [18 Jun 04] • Not Rated