i hope you write more of this i like it so far

I really love this story! It's one of my favs, but I've been patiently wait over a year for an update! I really want to get to the Buffy/Snape stuff! Please update soon. It would mean a lot to me and lots of other people!!

I like it. I hope you finish the story. Please update.

Good story, good overall plot... but I don't know where I stand on it... I'm very mixed about it. I loved the Severus and Buffy at the beginning, but then it started to get more OOC when the kids came... I believe Snape should still act the way he is normally to them. As for an addition of Tara, I'm not fond of that at all, adding too many characters leads to too many storylines that are not needed for the overall plot. (I have a problem with this too because I think of something and just want to add it!) Another thing that I find absolutely horrible is Buffy being younger, Harry and her are too close in age if she is only 16 and he is going into 5th year. You already mentioned that Buffy was born about a year before James and Lily were married (right out of Hogwarts) and I really don't see her being pregnant when getting married to him, so give it another 9 months. Buffy would be at least 2 years older than Harry. As for her teaching and getting paid, you should have just stuck with that plan in the beginning and not had her changed to be younger. But overall, I do enjoy the story (I read it didn't I?). I don't know how likely it is that you will add more as it has been a year since your last update. But I'd enjoy leraning what will happen.

hey there! just a quick review of your story here. i want you to know that i really really love this fic. it is, in my opinion, one of the best Buffy/Harry Potter crossover fics available on the Internet. i like the progression of all the character relationships and your representation of the characters themselves. and i love the way you've brought Tara into the mix. and the scene when Joyce gets her memories erased makes me cry like every time! (have i mentioned I've read this fic a few times? :P)

Now please don't take this the wrong way, I'm not flaming you in any way, but I'm not entirely happy about Sirius in this. i know he has his faults and a lot of what you have been saying in this is true, i would kind of like to see him becoming more accepting of Buffy. he has a big heart and genuinely cares about the ones around him (a part from Snape of course :D). i love him, a part from the twins he would probably be my favourite character and i would really like to see him and Buffy bonding more.

Also i know its been over 7 months but is there any chance of an update? i really would like to see how you continue this story.

Toni Ailisa
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Ok, I really love this fic so far however some things I noticeed need to be fixed some of the grammer/ tences of things past tence or 'she was about to tell him that she was the current slayer' should have been 'she wasn't about to tell him that she was the current slayer' things like that. Other than that this is an excelernt fic please continue soon.

I love this fic! PLEASE PLEASE update this fic it is wonderful! I love how Buffy got the minastry to agnolage that Fudge was not telling the truth and making it so that Umbrege didn't become the DADA teacher! Again more soon please!

I'm very much enjoying your story so far. Please update so we can all see where you are going with the story. I can't wait!!

I love this story and long for an update. please continue.

This is a great story premise. I hope you update soon, so we can see where your idea is heading.

I really like the premise of your story, and have long thought that Voldemort and Lily should have given Harry an unwanted bastard sibling. I think you're doing a great job of writing Buffy, and I'm glad that not only did her friends get to keep their memories of her, but that Faith gets her second chance too. I cried about Joyce losing her memories though. It seems incredibly cruel to Buffy, although I suppose Joyce would have been rather unable to find a place in the wizarding world, and wasn't safe knowing.

Severus seems way too mushy for his character, but I do like the pairing. I think it would have taken him a lot longer to develop and recognise his feelings for her, although Buffy is prone to develop crushes quickly. Everyone else seems to be rather in character, and I like the addition of Tara to the story.

Some of your sentances don't quite make sense, ie. :she was about to tell this no good slimly git that she was the slayer. “I started to help her slay and the Watcher’s Council wanted to meet me." Seems like there should be a not in there. Just stuff that a good beta could catch for you.

I like the relationship developing between Buffy and Harry, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the time at Hogwarts will go.

very nice chapter, cant wait to hear more. I do love Buffy's court speak, though It doesnt really sound very in character to how Buffy would act. ANYWAYS, good job, I felt the the information was a bit rushed out there, but it doesnt matter.

Excellent thanks for the update.

I was so happy to see this story continued. Great job with the whole trial...I loved Buffy as Harry's lawyer. She did a great job of manipulating Fudge. I understand about spelling errors, but I have to point out two major problems. One is a spelling error that is destroying the flow of the story: "apparate" not "apparant" or "apparent"...this is making readers have to pause in every chapter to make sure they understand the sentence. The other major flaw was the name of Harry's neighbor. She is Arabella Figg (Mrs. Norris is the caretaker's cat). Just thought you might want to correct these, if not in the already published chapters, at least in any upcoming chapters. Otherwise, I can't wait to see what trouble Buffy brings to Hogwarts and how her relationship with Snape develops. :)

thanks for the update loved the chapter specialy with buffy being all lawer'y