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Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from (2007 Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Love love the story so far! Can't wait to see what happens with Buffy and Ginny's family when they finally get the the burrow. Should be really interesting. Can't wait ;)
Review By [(2007 Donor)Fritolays] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from Javian
Review:
Lovely chapter. This is moving along nicely.
Review By [Javian] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from wizathogwarts
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Wonderful update and greatly appreciated.
The 'Relationship' is still building in spite of ms. denial. Hang in there Ginny, she's worth it.
The only thing that could have made me happier would be an update to 'Where the books are'.

Thank you so much
Review By [wizathogwarts] • Date [1 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - The Devil" from JoeDineen
Review:
had to reread to refamilarise me with the story. I like the chapter and I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from andy
Review:
great
can't wait to see how you finally get them together
nice chapter
hope for more soonish
Review By [andy] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 2a - The Burrow)" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very good!

Now do more more.

In fact, MOREMOREMORE!!!

Thank you.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [31 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from SpacedCadet
Review:
The series is great but several threads are hanging and I want to know how they come out.

Please do more!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from spring
Review:
I love this fic so far! PLEASE PLEASE please update/finish this wonderful fic! Please?!? I love this and I really really want to know when Buffy finally admits her feelings! More please!
Review By [spring] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from gigi
Review:
This is a good series. I really want to see what happens between Buffy and Ginny. Please update!
Review By [gigi] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from arkeus
Review:
Luna powa!!!

Another [unfinished] excellent fic.

Got to love your Dawn, and i love all your femslash relationships too.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments.

This one suffers from serious writers block at the moment. Buffy and Ginny's visit to the Burrow has been almost finished for a long time. If I ever get past that the rest of the story is fairly straightforward (and planned/outlined)

Dawn is one of my favorite characters, a good way to observe the life of a slayer from the outside.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - The Devil" from arkeus
Review:
Buffy's witch indeed :-)

Cute.

Timeless sword maiden...who could it be :p
Comments from author:
Given the large number of characters appearing in this entire series... there is really only one choice :-). Some of those characters in the prophecy(s) could actually be several different people :-) - except for this one.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from Eureka
Review:
Finish plz? Is pretty darn good, and would love to be able to read the rest if you will write it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments (and for the comments on my other stories). I am working on the next part (it's approx. 2/3's done right now). I do plan on finishing this. I haven't abandoned any of my stories, it's just been slow writing several of them for the last year. This is one of 4 stories I would really like to have finished before the end of the year (2007)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [10 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from soulfulone
Review:
i love this series and am so disappointed that it continues unfinshed, wishing desparately that you would return to it.......very lovely work.....subtext upon subtext with the romanitic possibilities between Ginny and Buffy......really wishing for at least a kiss the next time you return to this fic

its really a great story....thanks for writing and sharing
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [29 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from paradocs
Review:
Hi,
I really have enjoyed this story, again and again, and I've waited like the proverbial dog and the bone for more. I know that you don't write on anyones timetable (I'm total kudos with that) but -- will Buffy and Ginny finally reach that point that has kept me snapping at the bone for a while now?
Somewhat more seriously -- I really do enjoy this and all of the stories incorporated in the Red Raider 'Verse. The plot inspires me to read more, or the same over again, the characters are well written (though see below), the interest is constant and the pairing of Ginny and Buffy -- which I am assuming, probably with great latitude, will be happening? -- is not only sweet but so comfortably written it almost mimics life (fan-fic' life).
I have only one small hesitantly stated critique: The dialogue, specifically Buffy's and Ginny's can become labour-some. Abbreviated pretty much everything and slang are a large part of Buffy -- and from this it may be argued that she grew up and actually learned English 101; but I don't think any of us who have followed a pattern of speech really give it up. Ginny is less affected but still leans toward the formal letter writing dialogue sometimes: a certain amount of gratuitous 'perfect English' is totally expected, but she's still the only girl of six who likes to play Quidditch, fight Death Eaters and chase (or is that capture) boys.
I hope you read the rest of this 'cause I'm not done with the complements . . .
The entire build up to the point that you've left off is so . . . uh, together? You include bits of history, aspects of both the Magic world and Slayers that reinforces the plot, adds life to it. And that applies to all of the Crossover 'Verses that you've included.
While I really do hope that you continue to write this series -- and yeah, ok, I really am looking for the Ginny/Buffy kiss -- and I can also understand if you don't.
Especially with Molerat happening. . .

Happy writing and
Happy days,
Paradocs (Shawn)
Review By [paradocs] • Date [3 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trumps - Works - (Pt. 1 Plans)" from scottm
Review:
This is very good. I like the Buffy/Ginny arc a lot. They seem like a good couple. Is this the part of the series you are working on now?
If not, which part will you be posting updates to next and about how soon? Keep up the wonderful writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments.

I'm actually working on the next part of this now... unfortunately, it is taking longer than I'd expected.
Review By [scottm] • Date [14 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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