Hey, Jude.

Since it's been about 18 months, has your schedule and life settled down enough for you to work on new chapters for this story? I keep rereading the story every so often since I enjoy what you have here so far, and am eagerly looking forward to finding out what happens next. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Okay, I love this story, but I wasn't going to review until I saw Harry's new name...Dawn and Nox...LOL, all I heard when I saw that was Don Knotts, so thanks for that unintended laugh

Okay, I love this story, but I wasn't going to review until I saw Harry's new name...Dawn and Nox...LOL, all I heard when I saw that was Don Knotts, so thanks for that unintended laugh

I just read the story again. Ithink that Angel will be with Severus, and Wesley will be with Harry. Am I right? Please update, I am eager to read more. Also, I am wondering how Harry will react to his friends being upset when they find out about his "death". Are the last two Dursleys going to get theirs? How will Harry react to having a loving family? Also, what's going to happen with the L.A. crew? Plenty of material... more soon?

Snape is Xander's daddy? Xander is Dawn's and Harry's daddy? Snape and Wesley? Angel and....? A sane Dru? An insane Buffy? COME ON!!!! You gotta finish this!

I've enjoyed reading your story. I look forward to seeing the new Snape family's introduction to Hogwarts.

Well done so far. I hope you do have a chance to come back to this story and complete it. I'm enjoying it very much, and can't wait to find out what happens next. One point you haven't addressed is what you're going to do to preserve the Potter vaults and estates for Harry so he doesn't lose his entire inheritance from James and Lily Potter. He's already lost Hedwig, the photo album, etc., losing everything else may just break him the rest of the way. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Totally loving this story! Can't wait for more! Please, please, please update soon?!

Cna't wait for the update, I wait with baited breath.

You say it shall be added to. Is this still in affect? I like and I want more.

the next chapters are writted, but on paper only,
i need time to type them. but i'm working in animation movies and most of the time i don't have time to do it,
to be real i don't even have time to sleep, so!
i'll try to do it as soon as i can, some people told me
to put it on hiatus, but i can't, i really want to finish it some day. keep looking, if i'm not to tired i'll try to update this week end or the next one, but it will be unbetaed, it's been so long now that i don't have a beta anymore.
bye jude

This is actually pretty well-written...I hope your work will allow you some time to update soon.

Looking forward to the rest of the story.
You so need to spell & grammer check more.

But why NOX Snape? Why not a more normal name?
If Xan had a son (thru normal means), he'd probably be named Jesse.

Addendum: How old is Harry? If he's to be Dawn's twin, he'd be 16
But from the condition that the Snapes found him in at the Durleys he seemed younger like 12/13

I really enjoy this fanfic. You're a very good writer. I can understand not having time and working on other things. As long as you eventally finish the story, I'm good 'cause I'll wait as long as you need. ;) When it's this good, it's worth the wait.
Ryen

I look forward to this 'so called' continuation.

grammar 6/10
plot 8/10
spelling 9/10
style 8/10
ability to avoid cliche and coincidences 2/10
enjoyment factor 9.9999`/10

Enjoying this very much. Hope you are going to continue it!