It would be wonderful if you finished this story, however I can understand you not finishing it this is one of the few that I have read that can end as they are left and not seem wanting. Oh I love this fic

good story. but xander wouldnt have been able to show up at grimmauld place, because of the fidelius charm. you should continue it.

Interesting start, a little abrupt in parts. Would have like to see where it went.

Nice story, pity you stopped.

Well, I for one am glad that you are writing more. It'll be interesting to see where you go with this idea. However, I need to complain about the final line there. As dramatic and all as it may sound, I just don't see Harry as the fainting type. He's strong, young, athletic, healthy. I don't care how big the shock may be, I just don't think it would possibly make his blood pressure drop far enough to make him pass out. Aside from that, a great update. Looking forward to more. =]

while it was an interesting and unqiue concept (big thumbs up) i think that it lacked somethings. well for one even if Remus didn't know Buffy he should grieve for the daughter he didn't know and lost. more details of her diary.. you know as in actual entires (you can make them up)and of course more Xander. Alexander Potter older brother of the boy who lived? another thumbs up..

TY, for your review and all i have to say to your comments, just wait. It's coming up very soon.

~RebornPhoenix~

Okay first I am really enjoying this. Second, I want more and soon okay?

Thanks

Calia

Hmmm... interesting. I hope we get to see more of this story.

Thanks for sharing

love it wright more if you whould.