I absolutely love this story... especially the part with the fiction cop... and also Faith's name dilemma. Great job.

Fantastic!!!!!!!!!!

I have no other words...sorry to be so brief.



Cheers
MJ

wonderful! I loved faith's line about whether or not this makes her jewish...And it made perfect sense for Aragorn and Legolas to be brought here by Dawn bleeding on LOTR. I loved the fiction police! Nicely done.

Totally cute

This is one of the best responses I have seen. Short, well-written and with some great lines. And the characters are on target!

Only problems I had were: Legolas's reactions to Faith then Dawn hitting on him. Blushing then winking? That's a quick turnaround. It was the seal slippers, right? Get's them every time.

Willow mentions being a witch and the boys don't get upset? Witch-King anyone?

You ghost in the first part of the story that Angel and the others died specifically because Buffy and Giles refused help. Spike and Illyria now help when needed even though they are still upset-yet perfect priss Buffy gets to be catatonic when her own choices smack her in the face? Pot, kettle....Dawnie was the same way. The LA crew did their best-not their fault the Watchers cut them off and they were then slaughtered by the rather pathetic (and supremely unintimidating) Black Thorn...

Good choice on name-always did like those two together and it hardly happens in canon.

Nice - I think that's the first Fforde-based fanfic I've seen, which is odd considering how popular his books have become. One thing - it'd be nice if you could mention him as a source in your story, otherwise people might assume you've invented Jurisfiction as an easy way to resolve the plot.