Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from
MistieMossflowerReview:
Great story, I liked how you mixed BtVS/NCIS/Vampire: The Masquerade together. ^_^
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MistieMossflower] • Date [21 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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AnskuReview:
Intriguing :) I hope you'll get back to that sequel some day since I try to avoid reading works in process... especially ones that haven't been updated in years :)
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Ansku] • Date [22 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LanharReview:
ohhh... intersting and i so had to read the whole thin in one go..... very addictive. thanksfor posting it! i like the ending you put in, i wouldnt have gone for tim dieing or her saying no outright, it played best the way you wrote it! cant wait toread the sequal.
lanna
Comments from author:
Thanks.
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Lanhar] • Date [8 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from
katimaviklindzyReview:
Good plot but I'm a big Spike fan so I'm a bit biased about this story. I also like McGee a lot too.
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katimaviklindzy] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Not Rated
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tonisimoneReview:
are you ever going to write that sequel. if you are please write it soon. this story has the potential to be great.
Keep writing
tonisimone
Comments from author:
I did. Old Enemies and Old Acquaintances. Not a particularly good one, but it's what I came up with.
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tonisimone] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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purrfusReview:
I am missing something, which while it didn't stop me from enjoying the story kept bugging me. What happened to the hellmouth? Love the 3 way cross.
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purrfus] • Date [29 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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cjdunkReview:
More now. You can't leave it there. Or else there will be a bonfire with your name on it in the near future
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cjdunk] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Pretty good. Going to read the sequel later. Gotta go to bed now.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [23 May 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from
TraceyReview:
Ignore part of my previous review, did a bit of research and I was wrong, my apologies! *sighs* It's what I get for reviewing while on the phone with customers. Oops!
I do love the direction this story is taking and the depth of involvement Xander has with th different Clans. All the girls fighting over him is rather cute too.
Comments from author:
Thank you - it was kinda fun writing this story out as quickly as I did. Gets a little darker in the next fic, and Xander's harshness returns, so be warned.
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Tracey] • Date [7 Apr 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from
TraceyReview:
So far I like the story, but NCIS wouldn't be called on a murdered Marine, they deal only with Naval personnel -- of course, I haven't read the next chapter so it might tie in somehow but ...
Overall, the characterization of Xander is very brash and not what we are used to seeing. Years of being on his own would do that though. I like his chosen field and his interaction with Abby.
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Tracey] • Date [7 Apr 05] • Not Rated
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CaliadragonReview:
Damn this was good. I loved the way that you have this going and I look forward to seeing what happens next. Thanks and more soon I hope.
calia
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Caliadragon] • Date [21 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
RachelKReview:
I liked the little aside about Ducky having been watcher bred and trained. Not really sure about him being old enough to have been 18 + in ww2, though. But cool idea.
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RachelK] • Date [21 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
JoeHundredaireReview:
Any chance of a sequel? I still wanna see where the Willow/Faith/Dawn/Xander quadrangle is going. :)
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JoeHundredaire] • Date [20 Aug 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
CaliadragonReview:
Excellent chapter as always. I loved the fact that Tim fainted after she said yes and I loved Ducky's story about quiting the Watchers. Thanks for the laugh and more soon I hope.
Calia
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Caliadragon] • Date [20 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from
RachelKReview:
Hey. First I want to say, thanks for sharing the story. Second, let me say I get a little confused when there's more than one cross-over, so you're not necessarily telling my favorite kind of story. That said, I really do like the office banter. I'm a bit curious about your TENCHI MUYO effect that you've given to Xander, and find it slows down the story a little... as it is a sort of another unexpected crossover in the characterization department.
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RachelK] • Date [20 Aug 04] • Not Rated
