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Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from alexceasar
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“Out. Now.”

Buffy left without saying anything else; Jack always had to have the last word. But as she was walking away she was humming, “Doncha wish your girlfriend was fun like me…”

Jack slammed his office door shut.
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LOVED this. Very funny. Please continue. Its wonderful.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from sdavidm
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Great story! I think you've got the characterizations down, and you've managed to capture the wit in both series. Can't wait to read more!
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [25 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from Tempe
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This story is hilarious. I hope you decide to start updating again soon!
Review By [Tempe] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from spk
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Still loving it! Wishing for an update since it's been 8 months. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from Sahugani
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good for a giggle. keep it comming :)
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from mpop
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Great story.
Nough said.
Review By [mpop] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from carmsfic
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I LOVE THIS FIC! I truly enjoyed your story and I was glad to find an update on it. It's been a while since I've read a great fic and rereading yours was definitely worth it. I can't wait to see what else you have planned. Please post more soon I can't wait to see what else will happen.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bodyguard Buffy" from BlueBoo
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more... Please.
Review By [BlueBoo] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from RockyWilliams
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Loved the story so far, very funny and entertaining.
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from FlaneryReedus
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Man this story is soooo gooood!!! I absolutely LOVED it! Cannot wait to read more...
Review By [FlaneryReedus] • Date [18 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from stasa
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Loved the story, it's simply hilarious! Bringing Faith into the story was a brilliant move, and her and mini-Jack.... Loved it :D
Hope you update soon...
Review By [stasa] • Date [9 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from RippersGirl
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This is absolutely hilarious! I love it and I can't wait for more!
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from FuerGrissaOstDrauka
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This is great so far! Can't wait to read more.
Review By [FuerGrissaOstDrauka] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from banner
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That was fun and funny! I loved the way Jack negotiates - he's smart and tough and good at bargaining.
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackmail and Barters" from MisfitChick
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This is fabulous! PLEASE finish.
It's one of the few stories I read that makes Buffy and the Scoobies the focus but without taking over the SGC.

Bonus points for being really funny. The reports were awesome!
The only part that threw me was when Faith went to see Jack's clone. I had thought that Little J was going by John, if only to avoid confusion. But that's a minor thing (and it's been a while since I've seen that episode).

And how cool is it that Lorne's there! I'm assuming you're keeping this light and not going to mention how Lorne left LA and the Fang gang, or what happened to them after Not Fade Away. Which is cool. But it would be interesting to see your take on the fate of Lyri, Spike, Charles and Angel. If you want a vote, Spike and Lyri live. I don't care what happens to Angel. Broody pounce! Charles was pretty much a goner at the end. Love Gunn, but he's human, and was already wounded. Unless the Slayer crew stepped in to help. Then maybe he made it. Also, I believe Lorne's not wanting to be found, was applied more to Angel rather than anyone else.

If you went that way, Lyri's fun in that dry humor sort of way. Her observations are similar to Teal'c's. Plus the longer she's around, the more she'd adjust to humans to the point where she'd start to interact. Possibly using the Fred "persona", and we remember Fred being funny, right?
And of course, Spike's always fun.

But those are personaly opinions.
You're doing a great job with this.
Can't wait to see how it ends!
Hope all is well in your world.
Review By [MisfitChick] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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