Very Good. Voices were right, pacing was perfect, evoked emotions really well.

Excellent story.

::Starts reading the next story in the series::


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A great story. I enjoyed it very much. I hope that you will bring the SVU group back to work with Buffy and the gang again.

That was very interesting. Wonderful story! I like how you had Dawn and Buffy throughout the entire thing.

“Our killer is intelligent,” Dr. Wong said. “He also believes in this ritual. He would have done as much research as he could into how it works and what he would need before the first murder.”


But wasn't it stated earlier that he was mostly following the ritual out of habit? This is a big change from saying he was just getting off on the killing.

That nit aside, I am really enjoying this.

Please finish the other stories in this series!

Great story!!!

Very nicely done. thanks

Absolutely brilliant! I love the grown-up, positive direction you took the Buffyverse characters, the way Buffy uses her inner Slayer, Cragen's good sense not to look a given horse too deeply into its teeth, and last but not least, Stabler getting a lesson in not underestimating little girls :)

This was a good take on merging both genres...

Really enjoyed reading.

This is an amazingly well written story and I can fully understand why it won the COA award.



Good work
Aden

I have read and re-read this story(the whole series in fact) several times and I just realized that I have never left a review of it. I guess I should remedy that.

This is probably one of my favorite stories ever and is one of the stories that got me to like crossover stories so much. I have often said that the best crossover stories take the story elements that are similar or complimentary and build on them and you have done just that. The characters are spot on and the biggest compliment I can give on that is that I can picture it so clearly that it feels like I am watching it on TV. Once again, the way you have matured the BTVS characters but still kept them true to their core is amazing. They never felt wrong or out of place. I loved how you let Buffy use her slayer abilities to do more than just beat the crap out of something. Dawn is amazing. She has come a long way in becoming the mature woman she is in your story and it really suits her.

I am not as familiar with the L&O characters, I can still say that they felt real and never forced.

An awesome story. Thanks for may hours of enjoyment.

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Two other WIP's got me interested in Buffy/L&O:SVU crossovers, and I am so glad that they did because it led me here. This is a fantastic story. You did an amazing job with the characterizations. I LOVED everyone's reactions to their glimpses of The Slayer. I especially loved the scene between Buffy and Alan in the precinct. You have an amazing talent for the details, pulling a reader into the story, and keeping their interest. Can't wait to read the sequels. :)

Great story, I read it in one sitting. You are a very talented author.

Totaly awesome crossover. I love the way you worked Buffy & Dawn into the Law & Order world.