Excellent start.

More ?

Please!

Freakin awesome!

I would say write more, but apparently you're one of those lame authors who never updates after like, 4 chapters.

Unless you died, or something.

What a great, wonderful, marvelous fic!

It's been a few years since you've posted. Just wondering if the fic is dead or just mostly-dead? (ie: will you be coming back to it any time soon?)

Awesome job!

Oh, Harry is her brother! He is loved. I always wondered how it would be like if Harry had been raised with Sirius. Great to see the result. And I can imagine all four of them in black, red, and grey lol With their obsessive need for coffee. Poor Remus, what an odd weirdo out :-P

So if one likes George will the other like Fred?
>> When she did it, it was usually George, but when Molly did it, it was usually Fred – a fact that hadn’t slipped her notice.
A fact that means either Fred's a mama's boy or he needs some girlie action :-P

>> my dear Mrs. Lupin
Yay!!!!!! :-D


And just in case ya didn't get it. I LOVED the family dynamic between the two of them, and I love how they're the own unit and yet Remus and his Mrs. Tonks Lupin (lol) are VERY much a part of it.

Simply fantastic.
And Rory and George are so sweet

Oh! That was soo good.
Poor Dawnie!
Who is Cam? Whose kid is she?
Spike sanshued or however you spell that?
What's Oz doing there?
And why is she Southern? Not that there is anything wrong with that. And to be southern and from Louisiana is cool and my book. Especially if they're from NOLA. But why?
Oooo I can't wait to read the next chapter!

His sister? Who is James sister? Does he mean heart sister, cause that's awfully sweet.
Great chapter!

Awwwwwwww!
*sniffles* Sirius had better have a darned good excuse!

I definitely love this story! The dynamic between Harry, Rory, and Sirius is great, those three are so damn funny! I can't wait for the camp chapters to start! Please, please, please tell me that you plan on continuing this one!!!! I know its been like 2 and a half years since you updated but I'd really like to see more of this one!!!!

~ Kyra

I love this story and you have to update it!!! plz plz update:)

Great story so far. I would love to see where it goes next. Are you writing any new parts to it currently? Keep up the wonderful writing.

this story has a lot of resemblances to the "Key To Maruading" story. I like what you've done with it. I really like that you didn't have sirius go to Askaban. please Explain what happened when james & lily died. Does Dawn know James & lily are dead?

Update soon.

tonisimone

I've really enjoyed this thus far - I see you haven't updated in nearly two years now, so I despair of reading more! But I'd love to!

i loved it! the whole dynamic is great and i love how both aurora and elizabeth have their parent's traits. a wonderful read, so please updaye soon, okay?

Hey, i realize that it's been a long while since you've updated this fic, but i thought since even only the first stage of life it's already come to be one of my favourite fics, i thought i'd tell you that the Sirius-Rory-Harry-Lupin dynamic is quite the work. It's written so well in this case and it works, it's one of my favourite things about this fic. I'd love to see more out of this fic, I think it could become and extremely awesome fic.

That is an awesome story. I LOVE the dynamic between Rory Sirius and Harry. I would love to see more of this. Great work