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BlackBettyReview:
Its a great srory!....I think Spike and Sirius should be together, they have the same sense of humor sometimes.
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BlackBetty] • Date [8 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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miceddenReview:
love it
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micedden] • Date [7 Jul 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DuskieReview:
"whom many of you will remember as our third year DADA professor", your insinuating that he was everyone from all grades third year DADA teacher. you were talking to the whole school their, right?
I like this hope you continue. I thought it was interesting.
You totally need Xander commenting about Harry and Draco and the correlation between them and him and Cordy, in their bitching.
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Duskie] • Date [4 Apr 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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kcjadesoloReview:
total coolness. just were is the rest?
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kcjadesolo] • Date [31 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Love this. :-)
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Elleria] • Date [8 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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dogbertcarrollReview:
*grumble*
Tho' I hate to admit it you have a point about the slytherins.
Kinda overdone making about 75% of the characters gay-Bi. You really
shouldn't mess with character traits like that unless they haven't been
stated in canon and allow you some decent leeway to play with it and
even then it should be done sparingly so it's believable.
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dogbertcarroll] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Not Rated
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ZakhynsiaReview:
the first was cool and this one was better but you cant just stop like that ----- Write more please*puppy eyes and pouting lip*
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Zakhynsia] • Date [1 Dec 04] • Not Rated
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spaceyReview:
draco and harry! yay! ::giggle:: and xander and spike and willow as a totally inseperable unit, sex or no sex, just the three that complete eachother!
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spacey] • Date [3 Nov 04] • Not Rated
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AngelWithAttitudeReview:
hmm
maybe
xander/tonks or xander/spike
xander/willow/spike (i love that one)
spike/tonks or spike/snape
willow/tonks , willow/remus or willow/albus
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AngelWithAttitude] • Date [10 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ZiraReview:
Wow! Just one spelling thingy that I found - and that's pretty damn good. (it's Zabini, not Zambini!) I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm gathering OotP didn't happen? Please write more!
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Zira] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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GwydionReview:
Love the characters so far, maybe expand on Tonks a bit more.
Xander/Tonks
Willow/Remus
Spike/Minerva
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Gwydion] • Date [9 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ravenReview:
This is a sequel of sorts to the previous story where Willow, Xander and Spike leave because a propecy, yes? It seems like it is but I wasn't sure and the A/N doesn't really say either way. Hopefully it is since I rather liked that story...
Far more spelling mistakes this time around. For instance, First Days, had not hand, pecking order not peeking order...
"Cock up or start or start your rivalry in my class..." Lovely speech-too bad typos distracted from yummy Spike...
Did Poppy cure the infection that Xander and Willow picked up on the bluff? Or simply discover it? This section wasn't clear.
The paragraph at the Opening Feast is mostly Remus's p.o.v. but you have him looking on as Harry flirts with Neville and Remus? Are there two Remus's now? Otherwise it should be Harry flirts with him and Neville...
Isn't the name Bulstrode?
Not sure who should be paired with who. I would suggest waiting a bit for the Scoobies to acclimate before leaning towards pairings. Also, you seem to have Spike and Xander straddling the line between straight and bi...probably should decide who will land where then pairings can be decided.
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raven] • Date [8 Sep 04] • Not Rated
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bardReview:
good story. ineresting teory about xander as "demon magnet" ;)
about pairings...
most of your stories are slash, so i give slash/het pairings possabilities...
willow /w tongs or /w snape
spike /w snape or /w minerva
xander /w harry or /w hermione (can`t see him whith one of the teachers, may be if it some oc teacher?)
draco /w harry or /w xander or /w hermione
naville /w ginny (ron`s sister)
may be some one as treesom?
good luck, and more, plz!
Review By [
bard] • Date [8 Sep 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]