oh me goodness, I,m crying like a blithering idiot. Oh would you consider continuing this story? Soooo much potential in this story. I think I,m drowning in my tears.

Very sweet story!

Wonderfully done! A great idea brought into fruition with great writing.



Cheers
MJ

Question though ...
Is Doyle no longer a demon?
And who is older Harry? Is my memory faulty or is that OFC?

Oh my goodness.
Oh, wow. That was such a touching story.
There's good, there's great. But, this may sound insulting.
But it was simple. Simple in it's beauty, clear, refreshing, so damn lovely.
I can't describe it. All I know is that it was a very good read, and that it made me tear :-)

I really liked that! Please update this, I'd really like to know how this ends up!

Thanks for the review. This story stands as is, but you can read the sequel under my stories. It's calld 'Elementary Mathematics'.

This was a wonderful story to read, and the fact that it has Angel as the central character is defititely a plus. I think that pretty much everyone here was very much in character, and the other reviewers have pointed out any flaws in the plot that I could see. It'll be interesting to see where you take this.

Thank you. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

Oooh that was so cool!!! I can hardly wait for the next part!!!!!

Thanks. I'm hoping to have the first part of the second story in the series out soon.

just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more but please have it with Cordelia and not Buffy. I just cannot take stories with Buffy and children seriously sorry will stop moaning now and look foward to what you write.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story. I hope you will continue to enjoy it in the future.

so cute. kind of takes the parts from season 4 (i think it was saeson 4) when conor was an infant and transplants them to this. i think you hit angel dead on, i had to think on the doyels, i had forgotten that Doyel (i suck at spelling) was his last name and harry was a nick name for his ex. whistler sound about right too. great job. i am interested if you continue this. its great

There will be a continuation, so I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for the review.

awww... :) that was so cute. *g* a sequel would be great. :)

Thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

this was soooo cute i loved it so much awesome

Thanks, I appreciate the review.

So who's going to be assigned to Buffy, or what has happened to her?

Enjoying this, I think there are some problems with chronology - if I'm remembering the first HP book correctly Harry was only a few hours old when Voldemort killed his parents, certainly nowhere near the age to talk - but apart from that it's very interesting.

The whole hellmouth thing will be addressed eventually. I'm happy to hear you thought it was interesting. Thanks for letting me know what you thought.

Interesting argument...the poof as the grand-grand-grand...well you know...grand father of harry......
the fun thing will be if his Uncle Spike helps in his education......hehehe...that would be fun as hell......

I'm glad to see you enjoyed it. There may or may not be other familiar faces appearing, but I'm keeping mum about it. I reveal no plot point before it's time. I do hope to keep it entertaining. Thanks for letting me know what you thought.

Don't want to sound negative but with "The vampire with a soul" watching Harry wouldn't the world end in ooo I know, 2 years? Sort of mutes the entire point of having Harry growing up and defeating VolDyM. I would think that the problem of 99.9% of the world is greater than the problem of the .1%.

However, it would be funny though is that Angel got his act together to raise harry only to find the world plunged into hell because the hell mouth was opened. It would be short serious but hularious.

Thanks for the review. Actually the issue of the hellmouth will be addressed in the future, along with Harry's own destiny, but I don't want to give too much away. You're right, it would be amusing to end it that way, but I'm heading in a bit of a different direction. I appreciate the review. I hope you continue to read.