Review of chapter "Good Mornin Sunshine" from
MwhahahahaReview:
I like this story...I really hope you come back to it because I'd love to read more of it!
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Mwhahahaha] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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TonyTheJewReview:
Great story up-date soon
Comments from author:
Back from the grave just because of this one comment.
Review By [
TonyTheJew] • Date [10 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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bluealienessReview:
this is a really great idea. willow being powerless (in the sense that she can't see.) great writing so far! :)
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bluealieness] • Date [10 Jul 05] • Not Rated
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musicgirlReview:
I really like it. Poor Willow, blind. For that matter, why exactly is she blind? What's going to happen? Come on, don't just leave it here! More please?
Review By [
musicgirl] • Date [28 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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StormyReview:
Interesting! Who will she be paired with? Chapter 6 was a bit odd, first bit repeated ch5. Will she get home? Like it. How powerful is she?
Review By [
Stormy] • Date [14 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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bknutReview:
Really enjoying this story. I like Nathaniel and his growing friendship with Willow. Also how Willow is adjusting to all this and Jean Claude being mister snarky. ; ]
I would like a little more info on how she is seeing the auras are they a jumble or can she pick out individuals. If so it might be fun to know what each persons aura tells Willow about them.
Well thanks for the fun read.
Review By [
bknut] • Date [9 Jan 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BunneyReview:
Awesome part. I liked how you had nathanial stabnd up and be assertive for Willow. Keep it all coming. :)
Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [14 Dec 04] • Not Rated
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EricaReview:
I am really enjoying your story. Do you have a pairing yet? I honestly hope it would be Nathaniel as opposed to Asher. I really enjoy how you are giving him a backbone, and well Asher justs creeps me out. But hey that's just me and you are the author so I bow to your wisdom.
**cough..cough..Nathaniel..cough...**
Comments from author:
Nice suggesting. I do have a paring and it probably wont be Nathaniel for *this* story, but I have a Nathaniel story in mind for when I get writer's block / bored / finish. The story might take over though!
Review By [
Erica] • Date [13 Dec 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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yakuitReview:
Fantastic Chapters.... this is a pretty amazing story, has a nice rhythum to it and I am dying to see where this goes. 10 out of 10 this couldnt be better
Hope you update soon and happy Xmas from UK
Comments from author:
Thank you, Happy Holidays to you as well. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak though my temptation is to jump a few chapters ahead.
Review By [
yakuit] • Date [13 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Connecting the Dots" from
moonfoxReview:
Hope you get your puter probs all worked out soon, so you can post more.
I really like the way you are pulling the characters together.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'll be posting a little irregularly using this computor (which is not mine and so I don't get first dibs on) especially if my insomnia kicks in.
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moonfox] • Date [11 Dec 04] • Not Rated
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BunneyReview:
YAY!!! there is more but there isn't more more! I'm sorry you comp broke but happy i am that you updated :)
Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [11 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dialate (Part 3)" from
BunneyReview:
This is an awesome concept and i really can't wait to see where you are going with this! Post more please!
Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [14 Nov 04] • Not Rated
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WhiteWolfReview:
Don't let Willow fall for JC or Asher's fake charm. she didn't fall for Parker's, all though Parker is way out of his league, with those two vampires. *grin*
Comments from author:
No fake charm will get Willow, if (and this is a big if) I were to write Willow with Asher (becaouse I've already said no JC) it would take a *lot* of convincing on his part. She wouldn't just see (or not see as the case is) him and jump straight into bed, becaouse he was an uber sexy vampire hunk.
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WhiteWolf] • Date [14 Nov 04] • Not Rated
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ZiraReview:
Oooh! Willow standing up to the meanie vampire - very brave, especially as she can't see. But then, he did deserve it. I can't wait to see how Willow will react around a load of wereleopards, especially as they usually sleep piled up on one bed - from what I can remember of the books. Maybe they'd do that on Willow's bed as well? Anyway, love the story.
Review By [
Zira] • Date [14 Nov 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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angelaaskReview:
I like it! I especially like how Jean Claude seems to enjoy playing the Villian role way too much. I like the way he toys with her...very evil of him. ;} Luckily Anita and Asher seems willing to protect Willow from Jean Claude's mind games.
But I do think Willow should be a little more concern about being blind. I mean she doesn't even know if it is pernment or not. It doesn't necessarily means she have to be all weepy but just maybe a little more upset. Anyway thanks for writing and I would like to read more. ~ angelaask
Comments from author:
I'm getting to that next *grin* I know it's been a few chapters, but it has been less then 24 hours and her biggest concern is the mean evil vampire and living. *giggles* I had wrote it last night and decided to give that part it's own chaper (which needs one more sub section and it will be done)
I got the sense when I was reading the books Jean Claude would have lots and lots of fun being an evil villan. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Review By [
angelaask] • Date [14 Nov 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]