I love what you have so far. Stating that I must ask if you have forgotten about this wonderful fic because it has been two years since the last update and that was an author's note. Also I have a slight problem why would Buffy attack for no reason the children's parents? Normally she is much less likely to ask like that so what is with the OOC? Please please please update/finish this fic.

Honey,
If you need a Beta to chech your writing I would love to do it for you.

Anyways,
I love both this story and "Between the Candle..." and would love to read more.

Hope to talk to you soon,
Yours Faithfully,
Wolfchild

Hey, please update the story, i really think it its a good fanfic.

hello.. the story ın ıtself ıs great... but the fact that you have many errors and exspeccially the dıstance between your sentences ıs REALLY annoyıng. Please get a beta and fıx ıt... Cause I sense that your story ıs good... you should raıse above what you have wrıtten rıght now and make ıt qualıty:)

(... beta or you correctıng ıt.. that ıs up to you.. not even great changes:P but to tell the truth I nearly closed your story when I saw your fırst chapter... The way ıt looks... )

me

Please add the next chapter. I want to know more.

This story is off to a great start and is sweet and sad at the same time. I hope that you haven't abandoned it and will update it really really soon. ^_^

O.O please hurry>.<
this is awesome so far XD

So are you updating or not?

Re-edit: It's been over a year since you updated.
Are you gonna finish this story? It was just getting good!

Well i hope to see an update soon and i'll defintly look up your other stories.

Again, I think I reviewed this one before, and while aspects of your world-building still make me uncomfortable, your follow through is very good -- and I really liked how you blended in some aspects of the AB-verse.

I know I already reviewed this chapter, commenting on the speed education issues, but that aside, I really like how you developed the Wes friendship with the common, not particular dangerous secret and similar ability.

Another one I liked - thank you for coming back and writing again!

*happy dancin* I can't wait until u have this typed up. =]

~B~

This is *extremely* interesting, and you've setup what looks to be a very interesting tale. Is there any chance of getting more chapters on this story anytime soon? I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

Its a little choppy but intriguing. Please come back.